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Im still working on the second verse and i wanna do something else with the chorus, feed would help...

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I'm still working on this, i wanna re write the second verse, and do something else with the chorus, any feed would help...

well had a nice flow
a lot of meaning
cant really give you advice and wot not
cus i dont do audios
good doe

ur mic or voice sounds weird. lol but its a straight traack. i like the echo and repeated works. fell off flow a lil bit. lyrics were ok. dont see much improvement in this track. its the same as before.