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Az My Enemies Scurry -

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:45 pm
by ÐÛÇ£»
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Is It Fine You Denyin Sayin I Was Lien When I Said I Was Pushin Tha Iron?
..When Im Firin My Nine Its Like Benchin Players How I Put'Em On Pine...
Stop HIDING!!..Yo Azz Crying Where Yo Heart NOW!..Its Dark Out....
Shoulda Known You Didnt Wanna Start..BLLLOOW!!...Now You In A Zombie State
You Just Jivin But I Wouldnt Call Him Jj..But Definitely Tha One We Hate...
This Dumb Is Cake...You Not Alive So What Are We Facing...My Heart Pacin..
Now Not Alive...6 Feet Is Thee Hard Placement..
I Ain Scared Of Niggas Comin Back!! Matta A Fact You'll See My Niggas Going After Dead ...Similar TO Reincarnation!
Guess Yo!..Az My Tech Spoke Niggas Catch Ghost Faster Than Tha Scooby Doo Detective Agency...
Less Smoke So Rep Close...Betray Us..And You'll Get Wrecked In Pavement G...
You Don't Wanna Run This Route..Nigga You Spit Doubt...Studio Gangstas...Tha Recording Booth is Like A Laxative...Just So Niggas Could Get They Shit Out(PUSSY)[/align]

I'll Get Tha Feed Link Soon..

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:05 pm
by DressToKill
You need to match ya multies up there is alot of forced multies here..you got awesome concepts man..the scooby doo line was prob my fav but the multie was thrown off to hell..This was decently nice but I beleive with better multies the flow would be helped..more complexity would be present and it would just help overall..stay up dude

Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 12:41 am
by - Mutual -
yeah man nice multies
stayed on point nice flow
great concept
keep'em comin