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upping ya check dude

cool, check, good luck...

give it up dude.. dont even reply.. your finished!

bro you cant match-it-will-skill so why battle? mark's gotta be a spastic-or-ill
my rachet will kill, and i'll expose this phoney cause we know that "magic-anit-real"
reach into my bag of tricks, and probley pull ya out i feel bad i gotta pester-this-dork
sequence will remember-ya-corpse.. "marks below average" like a bullys semester-report
i'll have ya in chalk. why's the weaker-starting-mess if so my heater-sparking-stress
my team-brah-blasting-techs, watch me " correct marks " like a teacher-marking-tests
magics yapping-is-hurt-full and i'm sorta of sorry that my rapping-will-murk-you..
but the only time this magic man, got a "round of hands" was when we clappin-in-a-cricle

Better Punches in Bunches.....

(Read Slow-ish)

I "fuck up sequence" Like a "Drunk Sychronized Swimmer", You aint bringin' the heat mayne
You spit weak flames, Better call my verse “A Bad Hiding Place" cause it's quick to ruin “Seek gameâ€

this was a real good battle

bro you cant match-it-will-skill so why battle? mark's gotta be a spastic-or-ill
my rachet will kill, and i'll expose this phoney cause we know that "magic-anit-real"
good bar here. nice punchline but a careless spelling mistake fucked the multi and flow up

reach into my bag of tricks, and probley pull ya out i feel bad i gotta pester-this-dork
sequence will remember-ya-corpse.. "marks below average" like a bullys semester-report
again a nice bar here with a good punchline

i'll have ya in chalk. why's the weaker-starting-mess if so my heater-sparking-stress
my team-brah-blasting-techs, watch me " correct marks " like a teacher-marking-tests
this bar was ok. the punch was too similar as the last bar for me tho


magics yapping-is-hurt-full and i'm sorta of sorry that my rapping-will-murk-you..
but the only time this magic man, got a "round of hands" was when we clappin-in-a-cricle
ok bar. punch was ok nothin special

overall the verse was good. the flow and multis were spot on. a couple of nice punches and a couple of average ones. no personlas but hes new so it would be kinda hard to get any




I "fuck up sequence" Like a "Drunk Sychronized Swimmer", You aint bringin' the heat mayne
You spit weak flames, Better call my verse “A Bad Hiding Place" cause it's quick to ruin “Seek gameâ€

personals - Mark
punchlines -Mark
multis - Sequence
flow - Mark
metaphores - tied

nice battle guys mark wot a first battle great verse ya'll we'll have to battle sumtime
when i get to your standard of course

i vote mark

Lol, thanks guys

2-0 Magic..

personals/nameplay-Seq
punchlinesss-Seq
multis-mark
flow/swagg-mark
metaphores/similies-seq

close battle. i felt that Sequence came real hard with his verse. like hes hungry. and mark just kinda did what ever. very good battle

vote:
Sequence

1-2

Best Bars

MM:I "fuck up sequence" Like a "Drunk Sychronized Swimmer", You aint bringin' the heat mayne
You spit weak flames, Better call my verse “A Bad Hiding Place" cause it's quick to ruin “Seek gameâ€

thanks dude

Magic 3-1

Deadsilence... it don't matter...

personals/nameplay - Mark
punchlinesss - Mark
multis - Seq ( He had Sum forced though)
flow/swagg - Seq
metaphores/similies - Seq

Seq..
This was Bad

watch me " correct marks " like a teacher-marking-tests

> and i'll expose this phoney cause we know that "magic-anit-real"
^ Liekd Dat Line...


mark i Didnt Like Da Battlin Alone Line..
Overrall Strait Battle...

Vote - Mark

4-1 TKO.

Nice battle.

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