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This is an old track I wrote way back when I was in High Skoo and re-recorded in 06 I think not sure it's 4 da ladies I had to make one for them I had 2 switch it up a lil bit. Plz leave feedback on dis track and I will do da same 4 everybody.



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The beat was sick. You rode the beat properly and it flowed very well. I think you need to relax with the whole double up thing , its annoying to hear the same voice twice the whole song, makes you sound like a robot and it takes away some emotion from the track. Like toyh said you need to work on your lyrics and make them something new and unique.

verse1- it was pretty good,not the best tho
verse2- stood out the most'ta me for some reason,i felt this one the most
verse3- better then the first verse
hook- cudda been executed a lil better i think,like u cudda put more emotion into it,but its a goood drop man,stay@it

thanks 4 da feed lol I might re-do da track due 2 da fact I recorded it back when I was on da label I jus murdered lol mixin is horrible dats no lie but I thought I jus put it out good lookin on da feed

felt this alot

slow gets a little choppy but overall good
lyrics seem a little basic bt u did write this along time ago.

overall 8-10

good lookin on da feed yea shit is a really old track good lookin shit is appreciated