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okay this is a topic battle 12 bars due with in 72 since dead said he's workin,after both checks if anyone of the moderators want to select a topic we'll get this goin
this is my check by the way

[font=Comic Sans MS]By request through PM:

Topic:
Both of you are underdogs on Illest. How are you going to over-come the adversity of it and begin to shine?[/font]

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but i dont quite get it

i got it nevermind

I'm a write a cypher fo heaven and a script fit-fo-gods
give feed n help to noobs rookie and shit-on-sods
who hatin cus they writtens-suck
i'm gonna turn the other way like i dont give a fuck
i'm gone elevate so much my head touch the ceiling
it maybe revealing to know that if ya delete ya verse i'm not gone be squeeling
but i'm gonna be dealing wit rookies that cant find this appealing
under the circumstances one of my crazy rants is or can be very misleading
i'm gonna spit-outta-line it's about the time
you'll all quit-when-i-shine and it's all shit-outta-rhymes
and if you all stop bullshittin and focus
magic aint real no hokus pokus write a better verse ya know that i spoke-this
i may not be good enough fo a fucka to quote-this
but tonite a bright light let you know that i wrote-this
my scripts to hot so shut up now that ya know-this
do you notice da heat comin up from my coldness
ha ha ice meltin a phenomenom cause it -100
cause i'm da best the old ones are redundent
it be like a dyslexic doin a conundrum
doin it all wrong and SCIENTIST'S WONDERIN!!
why the waters evapouratin and da sun-be-meltin
ya cant stop my heat,the elite no gun-be-helpin
my script one you've read-it-evapourates
know that i've said-it-copy n paste

sequence's vote is not allowed.sorry bud u fucked up

Shit, ever since I came to Illest I've been the underdog from the get go//
They just wont let go, got my fumes rising higher than the price of petro//

I'm going to shoot to the top, and watch as complexity drops//
He'll be no longer hot, letting you all know the truth like perplexity shots//

I got a complex mind, out of the box imagination with a simple style//
Watch me flex this line, to get from a frown to a dimpled smile//

I'll make you laugh, ill make you cry, ill make you go insane//
I'm the up in coming artist after u die with a more developed brain//

Imma be quick on the come up, bringing the pain like toys and Santa clause//
Be ready to get fucked up, slash your brains all over like I have Santa's claws//

I'm from the North Pole to give all these haters frostbite, make little boys cry like Sequence//
These fags wanna get their salads tossed right, signing on this dotted like Imma ink this//

Imma hit the top faster than the growing hair on Sequence's nuts, I'll take the low blows//
I wont hesitate to do what I hafta do if I'm fucked, coz you hafta be clever and know hoes//

Illest is dieing and I'm going to take the load on my shoulders, I'm going to put everything in sight on my back//
All of these cats is lying like they hard like foam boulders, ill run Illest like New York to Joey Crack//

Doubt me, put my name in the dirt, than cover it up with a tombstone and read Rest in Peace//
I'm about me, throwing shots at the game like it hurt, now please let the best be deceased//

Fuck Illest, you all is just a star, and to that I must be the whole goddamn galaxy//
I'm going to lock this shit in a jar, seal it up real tight and put it out to see//

So everyone knows that I'm not fucking around, I'm for real and I'm aiming to tear this mother fucking roof off//
Call me a city and rap a town, I'm bigger and I got millions of people there feeding on my words from a trough//

Before I ever die put my name in the hall of fame, because I work harder than any rapper ever decided//
Ill put a diss out to everyone and put em on the wall of shame, because I'm the cracker that never needed guided//

5,4,3,2,1 YOURSELF!

[font=Comic Sans MS]Does this look like fucking Maury? Ya'll wanna have a conversation swap AIM names for christs sake.

Free-posting cleaned.

Sequence - Keep leaving feedback on a verse before both verses are posted and your vote will be discarded every time you fucking do it. Don't test me on that one, bud.

Sequence's vote doesn't count in this battle due to a request and his blatant ignorance for the rules.[/font]

I dunno what the voting criteria is but im gonna vote Mutual Hostility simply because he stuck to the topic more.
dont get me wrong his verse wasnt that great but he stuck to the topic

dead silence i expected you do better as i thought this topic would suit you but your verse had no focus. it was a more a diss to sequence and bigging yourself up rather than how you were gonna overcome adversety or whatever.

you also had some ridiculous lines

Imma be quick on the come up, bringing the pain like toys and Santa clause//
Be ready to get fucked up, slash your brains all over like I have Santa's claws//

maybe i just dont get it lol. there was a few more like this


Anyway vote Mutual Hostility

0-1 uppin

LOL at dead silence's verse

okay.. not a great battle... topicals should be a story.... with twists and good description, neither really where. I.e. How/ why your an underdog, about practicing, battling, elevating, gettin respect, the way you feel about being underrated etc. didn't see alot of this

Mutual - Verse was okay, multis and rhymes where solid, but could have been more varied (rhymed this 4 times in a row) which doesnt show great skill, stuck to the topic more like Cee4 said, talking about elevation, so it stayed to the topic and was decently written

Deadsilence - probably was the better written verse, flow was smoother, multis okay, but rhymes kinda one dimensional. But topic was all over the show, slaggin off sequence and some odd punches, not a story at all, punchlines really, and not even punchlines describing elevation lol, so kinda hard to give ya the vote when its a topical and you aint really stick to tha topic, yano

So mutual was a lil mroe consistent

vote mutual hostility..

fuck me sideways 0-2 uppin

yeah uppin votes

Well iv'e never heard of a topic battle but ok!
Mutual
had some nice lines ok mutlies i thought he was gonna go crazy with them but nah, but the rest was ok nice flow not to many pucnhes in it tho, he stuck to topic a lil more than dead..
Dead silence
started off nice but he stuck with one word rhymes, i didnt see much multies but punches didnt really hit hard for me

Overall the battle didnt impress me much,
vote goes to: Mutual