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as requested

5 Bars

Cats -

Punches
Personals
Wordplay
Multies
Structure

didnt give deadline but this my check

Im a livin genius, Cee4 on fire right now, you aint better than stale embers
Vision a Penis? Nah u gotta come on Illest to see registered male members!!
U aint gettin me riled, coz Knife you just aint cuttin it, im regarded greater
This destiny child, I`ll put Knife to the left, to the left, like a retarded waiter!! (get it)*
U got trouble stabbin, this Knifes no good, with zero wins kid your not sick
Cee double platinum, ur goin 'double wood', fuck a knife bitch u chopsticks!!
HQ screamin its a 'fee male' like an unpaid hooker, now u my smacked wife (owned)
Bite ya style? Nah like an AK v a Swiss Army, aint nobody wanna 'Jack-Knife'!!*
Make this Blade go down like Snipes accountant, u been dead and ya on a slope
Only time a UK bitch 'Stamp' her authority, the Queen's heads on tha envelope!!*


*The knife goes on the right hand side when laying a table
*A Swiss Army knife is a type of Jack-knife
*A picture of the Queens heads is on British postage stamps

uppin Knifes verse

Im a livin genius, Cee4 on fire right now, you aint better than stale embers
Vision a Penis? Nah u gotta come on Illest to see registered male members!!
^ Humorous, punch was ok

U aint gettin me riled, coz Knife you just aint cuttin it, im regarded greater
This destiny child, I`ll put Knife to the left, to the left, like a retarded waiter!! (get it)*
^ LOL good punch

U got trouble stabbin, this Knifes no good, with zero wins kid your not sick
Cee double platinum, ur goin 'double wood', fuck a knife bitch u chopsticks!!
^ Meh, the punch was ok, flow was nice tho

HQ screamin its a 'fee male' like an unpaid hooker, now u my smacked wife (owned)
Bite ya style? Nah like an AK v a Swiss Army, aint nobody wanna 'Jack-Knife'!!*
^ Good wordplay, punch was nice

Make this Blade go down like Snipes accountant, u been dead and ya on a slope
Only time a UK bitch 'Stamp' her authority, the Queen's heads on tha envelope!!*
^Nice, punch and wordplay was good

'd slap this bitch and he'd be C'in quadriple visions
cut this bitch in half, have his trousers in cross-tricklin* missions (pee-in on himself)
^ Meh, multies were good, wasn't feeling the punch tho

You yourself said, "ya knife will slice that chip off my shoulder"(1)
you just a bare ant to me, you forgot to solder the soldier (soldier ant without the poison)
^ It was ok

Why'd wanna stop 'murked'?(1) cuz that's what I'ma do to ur ass
Slice and chop it to 'tits' and 'bits', u can't tell what part is that part
^ Wasn't feeling htis bar either

Then, I'm gonn pimp this fag, place him on a C5 (2)
stump on your life like a used up cuban cigar
^ Set up was ok, didn't like the closer tho

C4, we ain't equals, i'm a sentence, u're just a diphthong (dick, thong)
You're a merit, sounds good, i'm an A1, a fucking distinction(3)
^ Wordplay attempt in the set up was forced, the closer was good

u aint in ma battle league, go get yourself fcuked up like masturbation
cuz the KNiFe is showing up on you more times than your tv stations
^ DIdn't like this bar

Punches: Cee
Personals: Tie, didn't see many
Wordplay: Cee
Multies: Cee
Structure: Cee

Vote: Cee4

uppin to get ahead of these thread wasting bastards lol jk

Punches- Cee
Personals--C33
Wordplay-Cee
Multies- Cee
Structure -Cee ,Knife Flow Was Kinda Distorted

So Cat Sweep To Cee.... Knife Ya My New Homie But Ya Gotta Come Harder Fam...Step Ya Bars Up.
And Don't Bold Words That Don't Rhyme..Or Add To The Concept Of A Punch...And If They Did Add To The Concept Of A Punch I Didnt Get It..Vote To Cee...But I've Seen Better Drops From The Both Of Ya.

Punches- Cee
Personals-Knife,just
Wordplay - Cee
Multies- Cee
Structure -Cee

i vote Cee really wasnt even close

3-0 Cee

3-0 K.O.