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I cut the dry weed, I light a dutch
im high so i try to touch the sky
i decide to fly but im stuck
so i duck with my eyes shut, but I rise
and I'm up with the skies in my clutch
I cry cuz I lie to much, don't ask why
I am dust, I'm not wise, it's a crutch
love disguised as lust, my insides are rust
where I hide my cuts, but they have died
my guts are tied to my pride and they bust
so, I'm crushed, I try to ride, but I rush
and I die, plus I can't drive, cuz I'm in rutz
so, I'm flushed, if I survive, it's luck
I strive to not mess up, but life is a clutz
she is contrived, and tough, we collide
we struck, she doesn't provide enough
if I ball it's cuz I'm nuts, so she sucks
I'm revived, by the trust, it struck
me as odd, so I blush, she wants to make up
she is rough, I'm surprised, but I must
so she is my bride, we are together by cuffs
she is my morning tide and my oceans gust
I dive, she is my guide, so i don't combust
she is my lows and my highs, my downs and my ups
my mountains and skies, my grounds and my crust
so I puff, smoke this dutch, with water in my eyes
but it's us, she is by my side, so we touch

...Wow ..
That Piece Was So Nice Fam ..
I Love How U Tie Words Together ..
Shit is Too Much Sometimes ..
Love How Everythin Rhymed From Beginnin to End ..
It Was a Dope ass Read ..
Props ..

Props i liked this shit dope man
nice deep rhymes goin all the way through

I cut the dry weed, I light a dutch
im high so i try to touch the sky
i decide to fly but im stuck
so i duck with my eyes shut, but I rise
and I'm up with the skies in my clutch

keep'em comin fave Bit ^

Mutual Hostility wrote:Props i liked this shit dope man
nice deep rhymes goin all the way through

I cut the dry weed, I light a dutch
im high so i try to touch the sky
i decide to fly but im stuck
so i duck with my eyes shut, but I rise
and I'm up with the skies in my clutch

keep'em comin fave Bit ^

You're the second person to say that's your favorite part. As it is mine. It's funny because I thought of that when I was in the shower.

I wonder if I was getting bathed in water of inspiration?

I appreciate the feedback.