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Arvincible

Rell

JayGunna




We be Wipin out the human population like dischargin eggs in a fuckin ovulation
cuz when we spit we genocidical on imbiciles like a mass murderer is the occupation!!
Keep a good observation, take a pencil and scrutinize-the-drops,
Im well equipped cuz that's how S.A.W. would utilize-their-props!!
More fire than hell-can-ask-fo' its Rell Fiasco, Jay n Arv, ya asshole, a new range-of-stars!
What u changin-for? we don't propose shit the only thing we engage-is-wars!!
All this bitin's how ya tooth-is-sharp, What a ruthless-start, we tearin fools apart, its crazy!!
Can we burn out illest as-a-whole like bakin casarole? its more yes than a maybe!!
We dont contain flaw, the hot fire forever enflames yall, S.A.W. Just leaves you in plain awe,
Thinkin hard'll leave ya skull cracked n brains-raw, Even "Wild" Bill from Texas cud never chain-SAW!
With all of Jay's hype and Rell's game tight, we havin a blast watchin lames fight! {Dom and miilz}
If we refrain and detain bites, then we takin out the team who can't even spell "aim" right {a.m.e.}
U gone in 60 like we jack cars, Cuz ill bust ya grill like broken pits in the backyard!!
you don't need to act hard, cuz I run miilz{miles} out so call me a fuckin track star!!
kurse is "King"? im takin his throne-first! Cuz the only time he's hard is during n'sync concerts!
Watch cuz this gon' hurt, we makin it big like Dead Silence's nose beatin his growin' spurt!!



Ayy ..
Look ..
Rell Arv and Jay Them Niggas To Start Sawin ya Brain ..Crawlin ya Frame ..
Wit Tha Bars That We Flame ..And Tha Only Time 'Bill' Will Be a'Head' is 'Monica Brain' ..
They Tha Best? i`m Drawin ya Name, Callin ya Claims, Rip U Til ya Spits Get Rattled ..
Fag Get Dismandled,& Lit Up Like a Christmas Candle, Throw you 'in tha Gutta' as if you Was apart of Tha Last Prick U Battled ..
Don't Get Too Mad Dude cus if so, In a Hearse Where you Lay ..You Finna Be a Victim No Nurse Couldn't Save ..
And ya Verse Juss as Gay ..Creativity To you Niggas is Spellin Curse Wit a K ...
i`m Crack Leave ya Mind On Tha Rocks Like U Head Climbin ..i`m Head Violent ..
Cops`ll Scrap U Up after Tha Blue & Red Sirens,ain't Talkin about tha Dude That Kiss ass When I Leave`em Dead Silence ..
Havin Bitches Heads Flyin ..Kid Thas How i`m Sprayin Mags ..Split you Down Like an asians Ass ..
Make it Fast cus i`m Not Playin Fag, Dang ya Trash,i`m Rip Niggas Silly Like When Jay Ripped Haz ..
Mah Bars Will Leave em Bakin On ya Head, Sleepin On U Bitches Not even Makin Up ya Bed ..
Kill ya Verse & Have ya Stankin cus ya Dead, 4 Suck Only Time 'Cee`s Sures' a Win is When He`s Shakin in a Thread ..
Snitches Cakin Up Wit Feds, and Everythin you Pricks Spit is Gay ..Gettin Big? I`ll Pull Out ya Caps Until you Get Decay ..
Ya Punches Will Never Hit Me Mayne ..i`m Simply Great, Dom i`ll Pull ya Strings Like i`m Rippin apart Tha instrument U Play ..Dang
I`m Ballin & Sick, Catch Me all in ya Bitch Scar ya Mouth Piece, Cus i`m Crawlin ya Spits ..
Move Out tha Way Like U in Tha 'U-Haul Wit a Stick .. I Don't Give a Fuck cus S.a.w In This Bitch ..



Silence Dead Yeh I Switched The Name..Time To Dispose This Pig/
All Know That..What He Raps..Are All Lies Thats Why His Nose Is Big!!!//(pinocchio muh fucker)
Wild Bill Can Get Murdered Too...Punchlines Leave Ya Body Slained/

This Guys A Cheater He Stay Changin His Catz (Cats) Like Felines Thats Not Potty Trained!!!//
HQ? Fucking Long Ass Neck..Get This Giraffe Off The Site..Shes Done What?/
Everybody oN This Rap Board She Rode..She Just Illests Number One Slut


Verbally And Viciously Victimizing This Emcee..Dead Silence Obviously Hatin On Me/
Easy To Sonn Him..Cause Jay Raised Dead Like Incantation Ceremonies!!!//
The Illests Arrived Me, Rell, And Arvicible..Who Can Fuck With The Click/
Eliminating Emcees...Is Like A Bad Habit...We Stuck With The Shit//
Real Talk Bill...Your Weak You'll Get Dropped With My Forces/
And Im Quick To Cause Disaster To The Wild..Like Hurricanes In Tropical Forests!!//
Not In My Sources..Nor My Path Just Step Away..Or Prepare For Decapitation/
SAW THE VETERANS Quick To Run Everyone Off The Site Like An Evacuation!!//

Yall Niggas Silly As Shit..Punchline Aim Yeh You'll Really Get Hit...
HQ Pic In Her Avy Got Me Thinkin If Shes Really A Bitch?....


Let The Hate Posts Rise...

With all of Jay's hype and Rell's game tight, we havin a blast watchin lames fight! {Dom and miilz}
If we refrain and detain bites, then we takin out the team who can't even spell "aim" right {a.m.e.}

Don't Get Too Mad Dude cus if so, In a Hearse Where you Lay ..You Finna Be a Victim No Nurse Couldn't Save ..
And ya Verse Juss as Gay ..Creativity To you Niggas is Spellin Curse Wit a K ...

Silence Dead Yeh I Switched The Name..Time To Dispose This Pig/
All Know That..What He Raps..Are All Lies Thats Why His Nose Is Big!!!//(pinocchio muh fucker)
Wild Bill Can Get Murdered Too...Punchlines Leave Ya Body Slained/
This Guys A Cheater He Stay Changin His Catz (Cats) Like Felines Thats Not Potty Trained!!!//
^^^^

dope verse from u 3. that was my favourite from them
killed it with the punchlines

Thanks Fam...

All 3 verse were nice. All had good punches.

Rell - The only problem I have is your structure at times, it takes away from the punch at times. For being stretched they still hit though.

Jay - I don't think anyones realize this yet, but that was creative man. Spelling "SAW The Veterans" down the side of your verse with the first letter of the first word, I only seen that one other time. Good shit.

Arv - You're a fucking queer, lol. Naw Im playin, multis and flow were on point like usual, and your punches hit better than what they usually do.

Favorites:

Arv:
With all of Jay's hype and Rell's game tight, we havin a blast watchin lames fight! {Dom and miilz}
If we refrain and detain bites, then we takin out the team who can't even spell "aim" right {a.m.e.}

Rell:
Snitches Cakin Up Wit Feds, and Everythin you Pricks Spit is Gay ..Gettin Big? I`ll Pull Out ya Caps Until you Get Decay ..
Ya Punches Will Never Hit Me Mayne ..i`m Simply Great, Dom i`ll Pull ya Strings Like i`m Rippin apart Tha instrument U Play ..Dang

Jay:
Not In My Sources..Nor My Path Just Step Away..Or Prepare For Decapitation/
SAW THE VETERANS Quick To Run Everyone Off The Site Like An Evacuation!!//

GoodLooks Cee and Bill ..
Niggas Keepin it Lyrical ..Thas What it is .

Think you'll creative because you spell curse with a K.

Haha.

Dope verses dudes. I don't have time for detailed feedback.

uppin

U gone in 60 like we jack cars,

^ Wud Wus U Thinkin When u Dropd Dat Line ( PURE WACK!).
Otha Den Dat Your Verse Wus Koo..


Don't Get Too Mad Dude cus if so, In a Hearse Where you Lay ..You Finna Be a Victim No Nurse Couldn't Save ..
And ya Verse Juss as Gay ..Creativity To you Niggas is Spellin Curse Wit a K ...


LMFAO!!!! CURSE WITH A K... ( Murdaed Dat Niggah) Rofl..

Snitches Cakin Up Wit Feds, and Everythin you Pricks Spit is Gay ..Gettin Big? I`ll Pull Out ya Caps Until you Get Decay ..
Ya Punches Will Never Hit Me Mayne ..i`m Simply Great, Dom i`ll Pull ya Strings Like i`m Rippin apart Tha instrument U Play ..Dang
I`m Ballin & Sick, Catch Me all in ya Bitch Scar ya Mouth Piece, Cus i`m Crawlin ya Spits ..
Move Out tha Way Like U in Tha 'U-Haul Wit a Stick .. I Don't Give a Fuck cus S.a.w In This Bitch ..

^^^ I Liked Dat Da Most From u Rell..
But Dat Curse Line Had Me Diein LOL....




This Guys A Cheater He Stay Changin His Catz (Cats) Like Felines Thats Not Potty Trained!!!//
^^^ LMAO... Dat Shit had Me Rollin

HQ? Fucking Long Ass Neck..Get This Giraffe Off The Site..Shes Done What?/
Everybody oN This Rap Board She Rode..She Just Illests Number One Slut < LoL @ Da Humor

Real Talk Bill...Your Weak You'll Get Dropped With My Forces/
And Im Quick To Cause Disaster To The Wild..Like Hurricanes In Tropical Forests!!//
Not In My Sources..Nor My Path Just Step Away..Or Prepare For Decapitation/
SAW THE VETERANS Quick To Run Everyone Off The Site Like An Evacuation!!//

Yall Niggas Silly As Shit..Punchline Aim Yeh You'll Really Get Hit...
HQ Pic In Her Avy Got Me Thinkin If Shes Really A Bitch?....

LOL^ @ Da Punches & Humor U Put Into Dat Shit Jay..

Overrall This Wus Pretty Solid...
Rell & Jay Had The Humor Goin
Arv Basically jus Boasted..
Wasnt Feelin Dat 60 Line At All LoL Corny As Hell


A Few Heads Got Bit Off Though..

Good Shit..

lol uppin...

"Keep a good observation, take a pencil and scrutinize-the-drops,
Im well equipped cuz that's how S.A.W. would utilize-their-props!!
More fire than hell-can-ask-fo' its Rell Fiasco, Jay n Arv, ya asshole, a new range-of-stars!
What u changin-for? we don't propose shit the only thing we engage-is-wars!! "

Woah, your flow is getting so good. If you would have rhymed, range of stars, with a nice punchline. Damn that would have been sick dude.

"More fire than hell-can-ask-fo' its Rell Fiasco, Jay n Arv, ya asshole, we'll have ya change-your-bars
You'll lames-are-hard, nah, we'll leave your brain-with-scars, so you'll finally see the new range-of-stars!

I think, something like that would have been much more effective. I'm not trying to undermine your ability. I'm just saying, that could have been a real strong start instead it lost a bit of it's spark with the change of rhymes and weak line.

"We dont contain flaw, the hot fire forever enflames yall, S.A.W. Just leaves you in plain awe,
Thinkin hard'll leave ya skull cracked n brains-raw, Even "Wild" Bill from Texas cud never chain-SAW! "

Nice play on words. Awesome man.

"U gone in 60 like we jack cars, Cuz ill bust ya grill like broken pits in the backyard!!
you don't need to act hard, cuz I run miilz{miles} out so call me a fuckin track star!! "

I didn't like the play on words, I think millions when I think miles. I don't know.

Rell Arv and Jay Them Niggas To Start Sawin ya Brain ..Crawlin ya Frame ..
Wit Tha Bars That We Flame ..And Tha Only Time 'Bill' Will Be a'Head' is 'Monica Brain' ..

Nice rhymes, but no.

"Don't Get Too Mad Dude cus if so, In a Hearse Where you Lay ..You Finna Be a Victim No Nurse Couldn't Save ..
And ya Verse Juss as Gay ..Creativity To you Niggas is Spellin Curse Wit a K ... "

Lmao, that was such a good punch man.

"i`m Crack Leave ya Mind On Tha Rocks Like U Head Climbin ..i`m Head Violent ..
Cops`ll Scrap U Up after Tha Blue & Red Sirens,ain't Talkin about tha Dude That Kiss ass When I Leave`em Dead Silence .. "

Yes, nice inner rhymes in between your rhymes to keep the flow going.

"Havin Bitches Heads Flyin ..Kid Thas How i`m Sprayin Mags ..Split you Down Like an asians Ass ..
Make it Fast cus i`m Not Playin Fag, Dang ya Trash,i`m Rip Niggas Silly Like When Jay Ripped Haz .. "

Nice diss.

"Ya Punches Will Never Hit Me Mayne ..i`m Simply Great, Dom i`ll Pull ya Strings Like i`m Rippin apart Tha instrument U Play ..Dang
I`m Ballin & Sick, Catch Me all in ya Bitch Scar ya Mouth Piece, Cus i`m Crawlin ya Spits ..
Move Out tha Way Like U in Tha 'U-Haul Wit a Stick .. I Don't Give a Fuck cus S.a.w In This Bitch .. "

Great ending.

"Real Talk Bill...Your Weak You'll Get Dropped With My Forces/
And Im Quick To Cause Disaster To The Wild..Like Hurricanes In Tropical Forests!!// "

Sick line.

Overall, Arvincible had his ups and down.

Rell, just ripped the shit up.

Jaygunna, dropped a moderately decent verse. Obviously, not close to his best.
It was cool to do the name of the crew though.

Good collaboration. Not one of the best ones to date, but it's a great start.

word up...thanks for the detail feed...

thanks plex ill be working on that shit haha

i was just the intro of the drop so haz, i didnt expect my self to be explosive like jay and rell on niggas

we had are parts to bring the delivery together, and our styles were just sick man you know it

i appreciate the good feed yall

uppin for more.

and our styles were just sick man you know it

Son How Are u Gunna Tell Me What i Know?
I Thought (i) Had a Mind Of My Own If im Correct?

lol at the comeback to try and spark beef, nice try but like most of your drops, its still needs work on the making sense part

so how about u take a nice glass of shut the fuck up?

Like Most Of My Drops?
LoL Even Jay Said im a Complexed As Writer
So Maybe u Cant Understand My Shit Cause ur Half Retarded
& Dat Glass Of Water Shit is Wack.. Son Set Are Battle Up So i Can Bite Your Fuckin Head off
u Wack Ass Vietnameez Homo