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White - Alpha Bill
Red - Hazard


Hungry for a bill, and Im still fasting for green in my pocket make it in this rap scene
Gats ring kill get closer to that dollar, killin people for paper grabbin em by they collar
Tell em pay me by the hour, not a gangsta salary, they know Ill slice em get their screams louder
Jailin these cowards,gonna be a no gleamin long ride, while they hog tied n Im stealin they powder
Turn a doubter to a believer, wont fire off the heater against a pusha who's candy is sweeter?
Need my money n the competition gettin weaker,I dont play games n my minds gettin steeper
When the dealer doesnt work, Ill resort to asassination for cash in lincolns, gainst cats who hatin
Cuz the facts remainin that Ill move around like tax evasion, then slash ur throat while u masticatin
My adrenaline faced in, more cash more greed, so the want for my stash went from want to a need
Thought this jaunts for free? Nah, workin hard in the streets, and these stacks keep on tauntin me
And these whacks keep on flauntin b, I want the rims and the car and the house with a built in bar
Imagining to kill to get this far, stomachs rumblin for green, grab pumps and go make a new scar
Windows tinted blacker than tar, the Hummer H3, buy diamonds an get some fake teeth
Money in my mouth cost more than you make in both weeks, dont need a job, just feet
So I can beat dudes head in when his dough doesnt come to me, but I see the underlyin fear
Step out the whip drawin near, dudes get tears, cause they know bout to get thunder in their ears
N the blunder time is here, money does evil things in times of need, girl cryin cause I faught her spouse,
Green is the devil when my minds aint level, lucky I didn't turn their whole home into a slaughter-house


This That "Blood Money" He-a-Crip?? i'll Give This C a Tip
I Keep Black Glovez Lyk My chick used Marker so i Cnt See-Da-Rip
Before The Hamma Pound Plee-Da-Fifth Commit Suicide
Turn ya Brainz To Debree-N-Bits, Drop ya Treez N Shit
Settle In Eaze N Sit, Neva-Dat i'm Shiftin ya Clothes Lyk da Weatha-Cat
son you'll be Stiff in Hella Pain,you Know im Smokin Piff Wid Hella Cane
Stuck In Purple Clouds Its Funny Cause When i Sniff-i-Smella-Chain,
Dressed in Black Lyk The Penpail Culdnt Write-Wid-Blue Might Come Thru
Ya Apartment Widda "Mask-on"(Mas-Kon) Like Rollin Wida Bostin-Cat
Everythinz Free When i Roll Thru, But u fiteback N ya Life its Costin-Rat
Dont Get This Shit Strtd-If-ya-Unstable i'll Pawn ya Chain With
Ya Slick Tongue IN.DA.PENDENT FAEVA Lyk da Artists-On-Ya-Label
Roll Thru the Night, Roll 2 N Light The L's Seekin-fa-Pray
Not Speakin.Ta.Day Find a Way 2 Rob a Creep den im Creepin.Away
Any Connectz Sleepin.Wid.Yay,Robb um Till Zeros Deep.in.My.Pay
Like im A Docta Dis Da Check.Up Sit Down & Git Ya Check.Up
Neva talk this Mime.Seeded Anotha Dood Crime.Breeded Knowin on Strip Dimez.Needed
So who got the Most.Weight?? Body um, Grab Da Toast.Wait "Hook um up wida bitch" n Make um Ghost.Bait


Catch us on the next one too. You'll be seeing a lot more of this duo.

So I can beat dudes head in when his dough doesnt come to me, but I see the underlyin fear
Step out the whip drawin near, dudes get tears, cause they know bout to get thunder in their ears
N the blunder time is here, money does evil things in times of need, girl cryin cause I faught her spouse,
Green is the devil when my minds aint level, lucky I didn't turn their whole home into a slaughter-house

bill that was a good closer
keep it up man..


Roll Thru the Night, Roll 2 N Light The L's Seekin-fa-Pray
Not Speakin.Ta.Day Find a Way 2 Rob a Creep den im Creepin.Away
Any Connectz Sleepin.Wid.Yay,Robb um Till Zeros Deep.in.My.Pay

best segment for hazard


good shit guys imma give yall a 7.5 for a collab, alot of potential but still not quite there yet
ur chemistry is pretty good for ur styles, cuz their very different but i can picture it in audio...
if that makes sense

but yeah good stuff..

Uppin 4 Feed.

So many things that you have both worked on so hard were lost in this piece.

I don't know if you didn't like the topic, or what.

The reason nobody is leaving feedback is because it wasn't very entertaining.

The bright spots were few and far between.

"Not Speakin.Ta.Day Find a Way 2 Rob a Creep den im Creepin.Away
Any Connectz Sleepin.Wid.Yay,Robb um Till Zeros Deep.in.My.Pay "

And for an example on the problems.

"N the blunder time is here, money does evil things in times of need, girl cryin cause I faught her spouse,
Green is the devil when my minds aint level, lucky I didn't turn their whole home into a slaughter-house "

Woah man. Look at the distance between them rhymes. This is one of the things you have worked on so hard. 18 words between rhymes?

As for Hazard.

"Before The Hamma Pound Plee-Da-Fifth Commit Suicide
Turn ya Brainz To Debree-N-Bits, Drop ya Treez N Shit "

What is this? Drop your trees and shit. You would never say to someone who was about to drop their weed. You're going to drop your trees n shit. I mean, it's just awkward.

"Dressed in Black Lyk The Penpail Culdnt Write-Wid-Blue Might Come Thru
Ya Apartment Widda "Mask-on"(Mas-Kon) Like Rollin Wida Bostin-Cat "

Not a good reference for wordplay either. Not many people no about Maskon in MA.

And it's just ridiculous to make them comparisons.

Overall, I didn't like this man. I think, you both had a lot you could have proved with this drop and failed at doing so.

Don't call this hating. I've left you both good feedback in the last few months.

Overall: 6/10, I expect better from both of you. Especially on a collaboration.

Yeah, I definetley feel you on what you said. After you pointed it out I realized how hyper-extended my bars were and how basic it was.

I'll just pick myself back up and come harder on the next one, for sure.

i Know u Aint Hatin i dont Care.
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