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Ill scatter and crack ya like ur face is brittle, ur eatin more skittles than a homo's-havin!
muthafucka came back with a new avy picture, and he really looks like Frodo-Baggins!!*
talk about havin hundreds of recorded-tracks, but their so cheap u shouldn't afford-to-rap!
im forced-to-blast, break faces like porcelaine-masks, ur not lead role u supportin-cast!
Beatin u aint an important-task, cuz I won't lose to a kid who's doll's his only source-of-ass!
What's more-to-ask? The only time u would 'get capped' is when your sportin Jordan-hats!
You must be snortin-crack comin at arvincible when he's heartless like his organs-lacked!
While u were never born-to-rap, ur just a piece of trash I'll easily leave u torn-to-scraps!
Ur in a room of desperation, this is the worst case to face cuz it's a lose-lose situation!
Faggot's got a kid in his house but he's the one watching Blue's-Clues for masturbation!
Every two of my lines sell better than twix-bars, u real fake like they made u in Pixars,*
What the fuck, why did I even take it this-far? This bitch aint even worth the six bars...

*Look at his pic X-D
* Pixars made Toy Story and Monsters Inc. they look kinda real but they're fake, get it?

Thats all imma explain, if u dont get anything let me know or dont vote fucker.

I aint on no homo shit,fucked up big time like romos shit,u cant handle the ball//*
get on ur hands and knees and crawl,u must be good at suckin dick on tracks coz u aint tall//
fakin ass gangsta shit,is just some pranksta shit, aprils fools is over u big dummy//
flow is crummy,flow is off beat, get on my heat, i eat cats like u tastes yummy//
then i spit you back out like some old school pork and beans//
cashed up wit monopoly bashed up, now show me some green//
lookin like some asian bitch,actin all hard like ur suppose to be the real daughter//**
if you claim to be fire well then im the cold bucket of water//
i kool it down as soon as you try to heat it up//
u aint even tru your a mistake that just keeps on gettin fucked//
no tru artist,now whos smarter,any no straight A's clappin hits//***
and no i aint flawless because you the one sayin throw some D's on that bitch//***

*tony romo fuckin up in the playoffs
**looks asian or sumtin in his pic
*** A as like on a report card and sayin that he got F's so he wants some D's just to pass

I aint on no homo shit,fucked up big time like romos shit,u cant handle the ball//*
get on ur hands and knees and crawl,u must be good at suckin dick on tracks coz u aint tall//
fakin ass gangsta shit,is just some pranksta shit, aprils fools is over u big dummy//
flow is crummy,flow is off beat, get on my heat, i eat cats like u tastes yummy//
then i spit you back out like some old school pork and beans//
cashed up wit monopoly bashed up, now show me some green//
lookin like some asian bitch,actin all hard like ur suppose to be the real daughter//**
if you claim to be fire well then im the cold bucket of water//
i kool it down as soon as you try to heat it up//
u aint even tru your a mistake that just keeps on gettin fucked//
no tru artist,now whos smarter,any no straight A's clappin hits//***
and no i aint flawless because you the one sayin throw some D's on that bitch//***

*tony romo fuckin up in the playoffs
**looks asian or sumtin in his pic
*** A as like on a report card and sayin that he got F's so he wants some D's just to pass

Way to not run away man

Uppin for votes now.

I too vote a cat sweep to Arv.

But I'm not going to be a dick about it, haha.

Dead Silence - Your verse wasn't horrible. It really wasn't. I see improvement in your battle verses. I think you need to work more on multis because some of your punches didn't hit as hard. Your punches were there, but some really missed due to lack of leadup to the initial punches. Work a little harder on flow also, you do have potential but you gotta be hungry.

Like I said, I see improvement in this verse compared to your others. Keep working at it.

Multies - Arvincible
Punchlines - Arvincible
Flow - Arvincible

Vote - Arvincible

Cat sweep.Dead Silence your verse wasnt bad but Arv just took it

Yeah good job dead silence, keep battling yo and ull get there..

Someone update this

Yeah good job dead silence, keep battling yo and ull get there..

Someone update this

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