Refugees Of Tha Streets

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sick written nigga im feelin dat shit dawg no question bout it
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I see society torn up they burnt out like blunts
gettin by wit roaches and they need dat skunk
this world is so cold its filled wit homicide
lil kids get it da worse cuz they get dramatized
so depressed teens turn into refugees
actin' like they don't care but it hits them mentally
signin up 4 da corp jus 4 da fuck of it
they could've done sumthin else but they on sum dummy shit
shorty is only 16 she's gettin pimped around
her mama's a crack fiend she's nowhere to be found
it's messed up cuz everyone knows her on da block
she on her own hustle she's always on da clock
and dis boy on da same block jus lost his popz
bout 5 years ago and now he bustin glocks
he gangbangin' now he thinks he owns da streets
he's jus another refugee dat popped himself cuz he wanted 2 sleep
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Post by Haz »

Wut is Dis a Jump On Collab? LOL!
Shit i'll Leave Both Yall Niggaz Feed Den


ThatGuy.. You Poetic Bastard Dis wus Sick Son..


See An Old Man On Tha Corner His Clothes Are Tattered There's Holes in His Shoes
it's Sad When You Talk To Him He Was A Veteran That Took A Bullet For You

^^^ wooooow.

A Few Blocks Away You'll See Another Man That You've Probably Seen Before
See Him Diggin Through Tha Trash While Tears Fill Ya Eyes 'Til Tha Scene is Torn
^ Soo Much Truth & Emotiion Son


if You Peer Down Tha Next Dark Alley i'm Sure You'll See A Gleaming Fire
Yet Again Another Homeless Man Livin Tha Life He Least Desires

Livin The Life He Least Desires... Son U got Deep Az Hell

People Afraid To Give Them Money Because They Fear All They'll Buy is Booze
it Doesn't Mean You Cant Give Them A Little Food Or Supply Their Shoes
^^ Dawg im About to Fall on da Floor.. U Just Murdaed Dis Concept



None Of These Men Are Bums Because They Have No House They're Just Homeless
i've Sat And Thought About This For A While And Now i Know This
^^ Itz Good U Sat & Thought About it Son. Cause U Wrote a ill poem like Dis..

You Reminded Me Of Pac in Ghetto Gospel.. No Bullshit..
This Was a ill As Poem, you Tore The Concept Apart Man..


HKX

I see society torn up they burnt out like blunts
gettin by wit roaches and they need dat skunk < "Gettin by with roaches"
"so little" .. Damn..



she on her own hustle she's always on da clock
and dis boy on da same block jus lost his popz
bout 5 years ago and now he bustin glocks
he gangbangin' now he thinks he owns da streets
he's jus another refugee dat popped himself cuz he wanted 2 sleep
^ u Got deep in This Lil Segment ..

Ya Verse Wus Decent


Anywayz Good Shit ThatGuy
& HKX ..
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nice verse man. good to see somebody tackling a real topic. personally i disagee with the whole message in this shit but thats another debate lol.

over here in the uk if u aint workin u get cash payments to tide u over. Obviously down here dudes spend them payments on booze and drugs but if you really wanna sort yaself out theres no reason why you cant. i`ve seen both sides of this shit. i got good friends from school who got hooked on drugs and before yyou know it their on smack. but at the same time i know dudes who beat that addiction and got on with their lifes.

from a UK perspective their is absolutley no excuse for being homless unless you got some form of addiction thats eating away at ya money. but that said my city is has a terrible problem with that shit but personally i dont feel any kinda sympathy for the homless.

although i dont agree with you i still give u props for tacklin this subject. you gave me somethin to think about lol
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right their not drug addicts coz of their addictions? that makes fuck all sense. honestly i`ll im from Glasgow Scotland and down here we got alchol and drug adddictions 10 X as bad as any city in the states. I guarantee you that is a fact. But the dudes that is homeless is homless coz they pissed their money away on some sort of addiction whether it be heroin alchohal gambling or some shit. they aint just on the street for no reason. all im sayin is if u want the help u can get out of it over here. but when u been on smack for 20 year i guess its kinda hard lol... junkies that cant handle their drugs lol
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thanks 4 da feedback there ain't nuthin better than da real
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This was purdy dope, I was digging it cuz I see the same thing EVERYDAY
and the sad thing is some of them are family members
I think it's one of my unk's that I'll see walkin' by erry now n then
dude had a shitload of scholorships lined up to play ball
but he gave that all up so he could drink now dude sits on the side of the road
bag full of cans to sell so dude could get his beer in for the day

then when I hit up the City I always see them vets sittin' there
them and there dogs and ish and I'm like damn....

sad thing is I saw a dude and his family walkin' by with sleeping bags and ish.....

this was definitly dope, makes me want to touch on some real ish
keep writing......sucka
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Post by Glamtrash »

Brilliant.

Nice lil add on, too. Good job, boys.

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