Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:29 am
yo dis shit right here reminds me of my cousin k dawg nigga is a marine now he use 2 rap and all but yo dis shit was nice dawg i like da whole thing nigga nuthin wrong wit dis
This is good, I like the concept of it and poetry is as you perceive it to be, I guess it is more poetry than rap - I'm starting to get used to it lol.
Fav bit:
it's Sick But They Always Armed With Weapons
Ninety Percent Of Tha Time They Harmed While Restin
They Dont Kno What They in For Or Why They Fall Out
No Such Thing As A Draft They Just Gettin Called Out