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Ill give you 3 days man so u can get a good minute to write.

I know you still write but hey, battling's different right?

Anyways cats are

Punches
Flow
Personals
Multis
Creativity/entertainment

No Hates,homos, or crew votes!!!

This is my check good luck man.

look at this kid u think u nice cuz headlines read 'arv beat haz'
u start weak as,FUCK and like a joggin session i make ya heart beat fast
if u were at all smart ud pass,on gettin ur ass kicked torn apart n smashed
im like Grim in ur pic hide in the dark n bash,ya face call it art n laugh
i kno u aint no gangsta juz cuz u think u got the best chrome
see homie,ur soft like ya bitch n shudda left the dress home
drawin on ya chest bones,im threat u shudnt of tried'ta test homes
cuz like Johnny Depp my quest iz'ta leave u with a fresh dome**
bitch dont u kno i shit on this place?everytime u spit its a disgrace
so im tellin u like Raptile n Game did GET OUTTA MY FACE

**= a movie Johnny Depp played in called Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street who wuz an insane barber..so givin him a 'fresh dome' wud be like cuttin hair u kno..rest shud be easy 2 figure out

[last line iz a song raptile n game did]

Ya rap isnt fly yo Pac is ashamed, so when i get to reaping ill go chopping-ya-brain + *
traumatic? why ya rockin the name? I'll give u the real meaning of psychological-pain!+
You sad cuz you rap like ur an addict, your wack ass is played so ill trap ya in the attic
My victories stacked cuz I'm automatic, ya flow's the only reason ya rap's so tramatik!+ (literally)
And see these skills I got could never-be-earned, its my spot you'll never-deserve,
U can say about just every-word n try to spit it on a mic but see u'll never-be-heard!+
See I just needa spit one bar n the task-is-done, u dont even needa ask-who's-won
If niggas wanna see this bastard-run, all they gotta do is wait for me to blast-the-gun
My shots ringin like the class-is-done, you cant run with me kid im just the faster-one
Ur no limp bizkit u just cracker-crumbs, those readin now is laughin cuz i smacked-a-bum!!

+'s are personals
* He has pac as his avy...make sense?

This was a decent battle Tram.

Uppin for votes now..

I'm breaking this down bar for bar to cancel any dick riding or hate votes or anything like that

Tramatik

look at this kid u think u nice cuz headlines read 'arv beat haz'
u start weak as,FUCK and like a joggin session i make ya heart beat fast

Solid punches, I think you coulda used better wordplay to make it harder though.

if u were at all smart ud pass,on gettin ur ass kicked torn apart n smashed
im like Grim in ur pic hide in the dark n bash,ya face call it art n laugh

Decent punch. Finished it up well, didnt like the art n laugh part though, took away kinda how hard it coulda hit.

i kno u aint no gangsta juz cuz u think u got the best chrome
see homie,ur soft like ya bitch n shudda left the dress home

Liked this bar. Good punch, hit well.

drawin on ya chest bones,im threat u shudnt of tried'ta test homes
cuz like Johnny Depp my quest iz'ta leave u with a fresh dome**

Good punch, good wordplay with that Johnny Depp line.

bitch dont u kno i shit on this place?everytime u spit its a disgrace
so im tellin u like Raptile n Game did GET OUTTA MY FACE

Didn't really connect, it was an alright bar but nothing that stood out.

Arvincibles

Ya rap isnt fly yo Pac is ashamed, so when i get to reaping ill go chopping-ya-brain + *
traumatic? why ya rockin the name? I'll give u the real meaning of psychological-pain!+

Alright punch, good connection with multis.

You sad cuz you rap like ur an addict, your wack ass is played so ill trap ya in the attic
My victories stacked cuz I'm automatic, ya flow's the only reason ya rap's so tramatik!+ (literally)

Decent punch, but you repped yourself and I don't like that in battle verses.

And see these skills I got could never-be-earned, its my spot you'll never-deserve,
U can say about just every-word n try to spit it on a mic but see u'll never-be-heard!+

Good hard hitting personal and punch, also used multis nice.

See I just needa spit one bar n the task-is-done, u dont even needa ask-who's-won
If niggas wanna see this bastard-run, all they gotta do is wait for me to blast-the-gun

Didnt like this punch or bar in general.

My shots ringin like the class-is-done, you cant run with me kid im just the faster-one
Ur no limp bizkit u just cracker-crumbs, those readin now is laughin cuz i smacked-a-bum!!

Added humor and it made me laugh. Solid punch along with wordplay and personals.

Punches - Arv
Personals - Arv
Flow - Both had pretty decent flow, but with the constant use of multis Arv took it.
Wordplay - Tramatik - That Sweeney Todd line was really creative.
Multis - Arv - Had a lot more multis that connected well.

Vote Arv.

Tramatik, you could tell you haven't battled in awhile like you stated. Solid verse but didn't come as hard as you could of, showed creativity and the oppertunity for hard hittin punchs but some fell short of hitting as hard as they could.

Punches - Arv
Flow -Matik
Personals - Arv
Multis -Matik hands down
Creativity/entertainment -Arv


Vote - Arv..

Closed and Updated.