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No Dick Ridin/Hate Or homo Votes..
No Flippin

Due 48 Hours Afta Check ins.

Cats:

Punchlines
Wordplay
Multis
Flow
Creativity

Yes indeed. Check.

Hey man my lady's here for the night.... So ya know. Haha. Post and I'll kick some shit off top whenever I see you've posted.

Ain in da Mood Right now
just Have it Done by 8 Tommorow at Night.

Uppin this. Both of you drop or the threads closed and no wins or losses will be given out.

Yeah for real Haz, let's get this finished tonight. It'll be a hot battle, fuck forgetting about it. I'll get on my verse, you get on yours and we'll both post some hotness.

Yo..Uh..Listen


This Vet.is.Grown Playing Games? i'll Disconnec His Cord so he Cant Reset.his.Dome
i Guess im in Pakistan my "Jet is home" & I See The Same race how i have "Met-a-Own"
Type ATLEAST-REALITY quote " im FUCKIN A ANIMAL" Get Real only on BEASTIALITY!
i'll Piss on ya Crown-Prick, Hearin da Word Defeat'll Drive u Nuts how Dat SOUND..CLICK!
You "Unda Me Dog" Like da HOUN'S DIC ,Dis my Sons Birthday "i Gotta ...CLOWN QUICK"
u Mus be ona "COKE-A-OLA" "COCKY" wen you u Needa "PEP SEE" like u hate COCA COLA
in ya Chair all Day "Stretch.Nark" how ya Tecs-is-Risin? u Stretch-Marks While ova Excercisin
Get ya Verse Rip'd like its D.J. Material, Cock Sucka got Murdad like he B.J'D a SERIAL
Call Um(Done) Nah Call Um (Wack) Call Um (PURE GARBAGE) its Like im da THREEWAY IMPERIAL
i "Calld um" Three Thingz-u-See he Needs 2 "Vow 4 Revenge" like Hes Giving a Ring-ta-Me
i'll Put Dis "Fone on Blast" Like a Loud RINGA SEE Befo U Write ya Verse BRING A G
Cus u Just Witnessed a "10.. X a 10", "Stuffin um in his Place" Like a MEX WID FRIEN'z

Coke a Ola
Ola='s High..
Coke High..

The wack PORTION'S DONE.. Got IV's of golf soil to leave your blood COURSIN' SON!//
His wordplay is like Nikes in Christopher Rios's colon.. This bitch is FORCE-IN PUNS!!!//
My RAP IS SLAMMIN' THIS YOUNGSTER... This HATCHET'S SCANNIN' TO PUNCTURE//
Obsessed immigrant.. Like I threw his country's map away, I'll PAK-I-STAN IN A DUMPSTER!!!//
TEXT THAT HE DROPS MOVES ME?!... His spits wouldn't be READ IF HE HAWKED RUBIES!//
And his style is stolen from Jada!... He's jackin' Kiss like SEVENTIES ROCK GROUPIES!!!//
Get the BACK OF YOUR HYMEN PEELED.. Hope his TACTIC'S TO FIND A SHEILD//
Fuck your title text... 'Lil niggas wouldn't dig you' if you were an AFRICAN DIAMOND FIELD!!//
Leave SPINES HIT WITH A BAT OR AXE... Skin? I'll SIGN HIS WITH A BATTLE SCRATCH//
Fuck your word-play... You can't play-words, like BLIND KIDS IN A SCRABBLE MATCH!!//
I SMASH RAPPERS CLEARLY KID..... Induce sleep? your BAD CHAPTERS NEARLY DID//
Cause a quarantine worker's menstrual flow is the only time HAZ-MATTER'S.. PERIOD!!!!//


Vote!

Punchlines- haz
Wordplay- meta/haz tied
Multis- meta
Flow- meta
Creativity- meta/haz tied

no hate haz ur my homie and all it jus wasnt your day i guess, i thought metas verse was harder hittin. nice battle though both verses were dope... metas on a roll here

Thanks for the vote man. 1-0 me.. Uppin... I'll give feed to anyone who drops a vote.

Punchlines: Meta
Wordplay: Haz
Multis: Meta
Flow: Meta
Creativity: Meta

Thanks for the vote Arv.. 2-0 me.. Uppin

This needs votes man. Hot battle, don't snooze.

This Vet.is.Grown Playing Games? i'll Disconnec His Cord so he Cant Reset.his.Dome
i Guess im in Pakistan my "Jet is home" & I See The Same race how i have "Met-a-Own"
...Not Feel'n The Punch
Type ATLEAST-REALITY quote " im FUCKIN A ANIMAL" Get Real only on BEASTIALITY!
i'll Piss on ya Crown-Prick, Hearin da Word Defeat'll Drive u Nuts how Dat SOUND..CLICK!
...Decent Personal .. But Didnt Make The Punch Hit Hard
You "Unda Me Dog" Like da HOUN'S DIC ,Dis my Sons Birthday "i Gotta ...CLOWN QUICK"
u Mus be ona "COKE-A-OLA" "COCKY" wen you u Needa "PEP SEE" like u hate COCA COLA
...Seems Forced Wit The Wordplay... The Pep See Was Iight .. But Punch Should Have Been Worded Better
in ya Chair all Day "Stretch.Nark" how ya Tecs-is-Risin? u Stretch-Marks While ova Excercisin
Get ya Verse Rip'd like its D.J. Material, Cock Sucka got Murdad like he B.J'D a SERIAL
...Naw Homie =[ .. I Get It Tho Blow Job's A Serial .. But It Makes No Sense, And Didnt Rhyme Wit The Set Up Line
Call Um(Done) Nah Call Um (Wack) Call Um (PURE GARBAGE) its Like im da THREEWAY IMPERIAL
i "Calld um" Three Thingz-u-See he Needs 2 "Vow 4 Revenge" like Hes Giving a Ring-ta-Me
... Decent ..Could Use A Bit More Work
i'll Put Dis "Fone on Blast" Like a Loud RINGA SEE Befo U Write ya Verse BRING A G
Cus u Just Witnessed a "10.. X a 10", "Stuffin um in his Place" Like a MEX WID FRIEN'z
..Not Feel'n The Way U Set It Up .. Or Follow Thru... And U Need To Try Harder When Rhyme'n

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The wack PORTION'S DONE.. Got IV's of golf soil to leave your blood COURSIN' SON!//
His wordplay is like Nikes in Christopher Rios's colon.. This bitch is FORCE-IN PUNS!!!//
...1st Line Was Creative And A Solid Set Up.. LOL Nice Second Line
My RAP IS SLAMMIN' THIS YOUNGSTER... This HATCHET'S SCANNIN' TO PUNCTURE//
Obsessed immigrant.. Like I threw his country's map away, I'll PAK-I-STAN IN A DUMPSTER!!!//
.....Iight Bar
TEXT THAT HE DROPS MOVES ME?!... His spits wouldn't be READ IF HE HAWKED RUBIES!//
And his style is stolen from Jada!... He's jackin' Kiss like SEVENTIES ROCK GROUPIES!!!//
..Nice Wordplay Use In The 1st Line...ROFL @ SECOND LINE
Get the BACK OF YOUR HYMEN PEELED.. Hope his TACTIC'S TO FIND A SHEILD//
Fuck your title text... 'Lil niggas wouldn't dig you' if you were an AFRICAN DIAMOND FIELD!!//
...WOW @ Second Line .. Hot Shiit
Leave SPINES HIT WITH A BAT OR AXE... Skin? I'll SIGN HIS WITH A BATTLE SCRATCH//
Fuck your word-play... You can't play-words, like BLIND KIDS IN A SCRABBLE MATCH!!//
...Played Concept .. But Its Coo
I SMASH RAPPERS CLEARLY KID..... Induce sleep? your BAD CHAPTERS NEARLY DID//
Cause a quarantine worker's menstrual flow is the only time HAZ-MATTER'S.. PERIOD!!!!//
..Decent Closer

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Honestly Meta Owned On This One

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