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Your serial killer is: Jeffery Dahmer - http://www.carpenoctem.tv/killers/dahmer.html Check sticky for more info if needed.

idiot that link doesnt even work

Try again, there was a period at the end of the link for some reason.

If they don't check before 2:30pm est time on saturday both get Dq'd

I run the fucking tourney, not you. No ones checked and my tourney isnt going to be just thrown the fuck away and given a default winner.

lmao @ this guy talkin and he was late last round, fuck off, i have a life

motherfuckin check bitches

sorry i had comcast troubles and i work soo check ill drop tonight or tomorrow mornin..

and i dont think me or harlequin have ever flaked on a battle/tourny...!!!

typed this up really quick dont really have time to do some intricate piece so take it as it is, its six bars but the way it shows up on illest is really stretched and the first person who bitches can be the one who goes in and fixes it so it is 6 bars..enjoy!

no one perceived murder as he did but then again most never experience the struggle that he lived,
no one saw the world as he saw it, most people ignore their barbaric tendencies but he enthralled it,
normal people urge to kill but never chased it he embraced it, like anatomy class he made
dissections putting body parts in a glass, he sed god gave him directions, fueled by thoughts
of the past he tortured souls,trying to control the lives he stole, he drilled holes in the
skulls of his foes, he sealed the fate of men becus they were the ones who betrayed him,
pleas of insanity but he was aware of his crimes against humanity, conscious of the calamity and fear he inflicted, committed extensive murder like he was addicted, gloating like he was sure to be acquitted, like brutal death by men is humane and life is inane, how could God ever endorse such sacreligious
practices, a man who'd murder many men just to get a few in the sack with him,
in cannibalistic sin he lusted for the taste of men, he claimed the
lives of over 15 them and 15 life sentences was the end of him

there bitches, now it looks completely fucked up but hey thank god structure isnt a fuckin category right?
enjoy asses

A child of scorn he was sexually raped n molested in 1968,
But the jake dismissed the case, now dudes content to getta taste,
Of the morbid experimentations, cannibalism and decapitation,
Anger n rage turned the page but the army taught em assassination,
Preyin on fools n faggets to get back at the 1st guy who did tap it,
Has a way wit murder, skin em n burn the evidence in pools of acids,
His grandmother hated him, threw him out but he jus kept slayin em,
He kept maimin em later this sick mutha fucka made a play wit em,
Got caught for Sexual assault, put in the rock n still didn't stop,
Got out and killed ona drop, vcr's workin he filmed it n watched,
Sentenced for 15 deaths, pled insanity jus hopin but got denied,
New inside his life was over, damn! The prison guards watched em die,

lol nicee sym, very sick indeed

first of all i think this was a great topic. so props to bill.
i dunno if these were the cats if not, let me know.

Creativity - HQ
Vocab - HQ
Flow - Sym

both verses were good. but i think sam's was more creative and it was more interesting to read. sym's to me was just all the facts not enough imagery. but i really liked your closer.

good job

vote = HQ

Creativity - HQ
Vocab - HQ
Flow - Ghost


Vote - HQ


I think HQ was a lot more creative. This was a good battle. The standard was higher here than the other battle. Like HQ said her structure was different but i actually thought it worked pretty well. Ghost had good structure and flow. but like Sam said Ghost stuck more to the facts and didnt really put his own twist on it. Hq also had the better vocab here.

Harle - No hate. You're going to need to re-structure it yourself. It's 4 and a half bars right now. It was 8 when put into Microsoft Word. If you could do that it would be appreciated.

HQ nice verse and battle.... nothin needs to be done about it im jus lettin you know that there is no way that verse is 6 bars... if you were structure that down into a clean verse its 8 to 9 bars....i could wrote a better verse if could of used 8 bars 6 jus wasnt enuff for this topic...

hehe well im not going to vote until it is fair.

nice drop to the both of you though..just kinda lopsided in info and size