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Off the top.. like TOUPEES IN A GUST OF WIND, WHOSE PHRASES COULD FUCK WITH HIM??//
And fuck gunplay but I'm 1-800-Flowers.. I'll give your *BOO-K's* LIKE YOUR SLUT'S A FRIEND!!//
Each rhyme that I THINK'S A FATAL CARTRIDGE BITCH... My INK IS LABELED MARVELOUS//
Hit you with artillery shells for no reason... like the SPHINX'S NASAL CARTILAGE!!//
Get your FACIAL FEATURES DISTORTED... Each PHRASE IS DEEPER THAN ORCHID//
They've developed a taste for human blood.. Who you think GAVE THE LEECHES THE CORPSES?!//
I fed your FLESH TO PARASITIC WORMS..... Battlers? I'm not STRESSIN' THEIR SPECIFIC TERMS//
Stunning rhymes.... I'll *have your mouth bein' ajar* like I LEFT YOUR PAIR OF LIPS IN URNS!!//
I'll prove intellectual property on a BIBLE CHAPTER AND OWN IT.... SLICIN RAPPERS TO QUOTIENTS//
I'm the dopest thing you've seen since Time died, rose again and CYCLED BACK TO THIS MOMENT!!//
PRAISE AND HONOR THIS REBEL, or forcibly walk a path PAVED WITH SQUALOR AND DEVILS//
My *lines are too long*?.. Nah, like amateur coke-heads you just gotta RAISE YOUR TOLERANCE LEVEL!//
When I drop these MAD NOTES THEN FLORA'S BORN... I'll let you FAGS QUOTE THE HORNET'S SCORN//
But bite a word and I'll knock you the fuck out like a RAG SOAKED IN CHLOROFORM!!//
I'll erode your hills to jagged peaks with a breeze...my breath TEXTURIZES ENEMY FLOWS//
Cause bitch you couldn't see The Demon if you were EXORCISIN' EMILY ROSE!!//


Does my vote count yet?... Lol...

Hahah noooooo fuck LetsBeef.. I'm from the Soundclick forums mainly.. nowhere in particular though. But haha yeah man I appreciate the feedback on the piece.. I'm gonna hip up your Livin' the Dream thread tomorrow... I tried a minute ago but it's too long to be trying to properly absorb at this time of night. I am really attached to the capped multies though haha... Can I get some more feed on that?.. If that throws you guys off I'll switch-up my structure on here.. I know every site has its preferences.

probley one of the best new emcees on illest for a while i'll say

some pretty dope punches in the mix man, but i agree your flow is sorta a tad off but barely keep up, keep droppin, and i'll keep feeding

Yeah, the flow was definitely choppy but it was like 2 AM and I just wanted to bang something out before I went to bed.. Thanks for the props man.

Yeah u Str8

i Undastand u Been Battling For 5 Years??
Dats Kool.. u Got Multis & Some Good Punches in da Mix
Ya Wordplay Wus Pretty Decent 2.
We should Battle

Keep Doin you Aiight

Stay Up & Stay Active!

Yeah if you're down to battle then I definitely am... Just let me know

Overall Solid. Some things were a little simple...But for the most part flow/punch wise shit was solid...And consistant

"PRAISE AND HONOR THIS REBEL, or forcibly walk a path PAVED WITH SQUALOR AND DEVILS//
My *lines are too long*?.. Nah, like amateur coke-heads you just gotta RAISE YOUR TOLERANCE LEVEL!// "

"I'll prove intellectual property on a BIBLE CHAPTER AND OWN IT.... SLICIN RAPPERS TO QUOTIENTS//
I'm the dopest thing you've seen since Time died, rose again and CYCLED BACK TO THIS MOMENT!!// "

"I'll erode your hills to jagged peaks with a breeze...my breath TEXTURIZES ENEMY FLOWS//
Cause bitch you couldn't see The Demon if you were EXORCISIN' EMILY ROSE!!// "

The ones above were my favorite.

The wording of all the bars was ill. The aggression was on point.

The rest were creative, but stretched my imagination a little bit to far.

Anyway, it's good to see you on here. I can see you dominating the battle grounds real quick.

Thanks for the props and feed guys.. much appreciated.

Bar none, the best new-comer to Illest. Like Plex said, I can see you dominating the battle grounds and stuff like this will get you Rookie Of The Year on here too, even though you've been doing this for awhile which is apparent.

Everything about this piece is nice besides a chopped flow here and there, but like Seq said, barely. Structure was a little stretched, but who am I to talk, lol.

Wordplay was real nice, same with punches and multis. You use a lot of different words that aren't simplistic, it makes people read the words and it makes people appreciate it more when you're not rhyming "gun" and run" and instead rhyming "AVED WITH SQUALOR AND DEVILS" and "RAISE YOUR TOLERANCE LEVEL!".

Thanks man I appreciate the read and the feedback. And yeah, I'm really feeling this site. You guys are focused on ELEVATING.... not battle records and cry baby shit. I see myself here for a long time.

Best Rookie in a while

Sick multis
Flow was E-z For me.
Punches were nice

Keep up my dude

Good shit dude. You can definitely tell you're not new to this. I have nothing to say that's not already been said. So keep droppin.

Thanks you guys... I'm probably gonna post up some more shit tomorrow so be lookin' out for that. Thanks for reading.

Off the top.. like TOUPEES IN A GUST OF WIND, WHOSE PHRASES COULD FUCK WITH HIM??//

Each rhyme that I THINK'S A FATAL CARTRIDGE BITCH... My INK IS LABELED MARVELOUS//

I'll prove intellectual property on a BIBLE CHAPTER AND OWN IT.... SLICIN RAPPERS TO QUOTIENTS//
I'm the dopest thing you've seen since Time died, rose again and CYCLED BACK TO THIS MOMENT!!//

PRAISE AND HONOR THIS REBEL, or forcibly walk a path PAVED WITH SQUALOR AND DEVILS//
My *lines are too long*?.. Nah, like amateur coke-heads you just gotta RAISE YOUR TOLERANCE LEVEL!//
When I drop these MAD NOTES THEN FLORA'S BORN... I'll let you FAGS QUOTE THE HORNET'S SCORN//
But bite a word and I'll knock you the fuck out like a RAG SOAKED IN CHLOROFORM!!//
I'll erode your hills to jagged peaks with a breeze...my breath TEXTURIZES ENEMY FLOWS//
Cause bitch you couldn't see The Demon if you were EXORCISIN' EMILY ROSE!!//

shit that really hit hard right there, all that shit was dope as hell, nice showin of skill homie