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Dom this is just sparing, honestly theres no hate dawg
but dont be mad coz i took ya spot like Akon did Nate Dogg! //

From shitty audio to Illest stories, ATTN! your fables are wack son
And u need anti lock braking coz someone disabled your tracks son! (traction) //*
Like Rocky give it up ur done!, Im about finish you like aids did Eazy E!
Dead like your Fight Club, if it was a movie it would go straight to DVD! //
Illest is a desert, coz Cee they cant see!, I can be a bastard when I spit
Virgins don't need condoms, Illests the only place theres a Hazard to ya dick! //
punchline prince? Lets keep this joke goin, u can be his satirical princess
But on the real im the king, I`m fuckin you up brotha call it lyrical incest! //
Kurse beat you and u went on the run, then it was my turn to bomb u clown
All the vets knew who won, Plex had to drop a dick vote to calm you down! //
Since then his rhymes been horrible, guitar boy disappeared from the spectrum
Wanna collab on some audio, lets jam! I`ll cut your vocal chords with ya plectrum! //
fuck this rubber gloved bandit, lying bout his nationality, when will this fool finish
Let me be candid, HE`S SCOTTISH! Only at the breakfast table is Dom a full english! //





*He deleted all his tracks from the creation chamber

**DJ, Ghost and Kurse said i won but Plex picked that one battle to vote on and gave him a cat sweep. lol

**Damn Domino. I heard your audio and u sound 100% scottish. and over here a full english is a common name for a fried breakfast. (Dom will get it)

Dead like your Fight Club, if it was a movie it would go straight to DVD! //

Lmao^

Wanna collab on some audio, lets jam! I`ll cut your vocal chords with ya plectrum! //
fuck this rubber gloved bandit, lying bout his nationality, when will this fool finish
Let me be candid, HE`S SCOTTISH! Only at the breakfast table is Dom a full english! //

Hard^

Solid Verse Right Here, Good Choice Putting Two Similes in Some Lines Too. i Lol'd When i Saw Rubber Gloved Bandit Lmao. And ur Right i Do Have Something Of a Scottish Twang in My Accent Due To Living There For So Long So i Wouldn't Call Myself 'Full' English These Days Haha.

Anyway, Some Really Creative Ones in There, Especially The Last Line. Keep it Up.

yeah cheers for the feed. Dom its kinda funny how out the whole site the 2 best punchliners are from the UK. we definitly have a better sense of humour over here. good lookin TGYH for the brief feed lol. i respect what u got to say. u criticised me before about my stretched bars and forced rhymes. thats what i`ve been tryin to improve on the last month or so yeah so good lookin on the feed

Like Rocky give it up ur done!, Im about finish you like aids did Eazy E!
Dead like your Fight Club, if it was a movie it would go straight to DVD! //

Great fuckin punch mang...lol

punchline prince? Lets keep this joke goin, u can be his satirical princess
But on the real im the king, I`m fuckin you up brotha call it lyrical incest! //

^^Your best Line, that shit was hard..

Idk man ur punches are nice, i cant make punchlines like that, it doesnt come to me like that
If you look at my style the majority of it is more like Diction and Syntax..
BUt urs has all the elements, and these lines are personals too so it all goes good together.
I want to read more so i can learn lol
Good shit.

Arvincible wrote:Idk man ur punches are nice, i cant make punchlines like that, it doesnt come to me like that
If you look at my style the majority of it is more like Diction and Syntax..
BUt urs has all the elements, and these lines are personals too so it all goes good together.

Making Punchlines Out Of Personals is Pretty Easy id Say Since it Narrows Down ur Options.

as For Making Punchlines in General, Think Of Any Random Shit. a Lot Of My Punchlines Come From Watching Adverts On TV. Try And Make Anything u See into a Punchline And You'll Get Better.

THanks ^^^