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heres the remade version of the remade song loool,i re did it this morning and i like it and hope yall do too,dont be afraid 2 point out the flaws or whatever[as ghost does which i like]newayz here it iz

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6307256

showed emotion...was loud enough...you didn't seem to be on beat...honestly i liked the other one....you had too much of a echoe

wasnt an echo it was a double up and uh how wasnt i on beat?lool

but thanks 4 the feed man

it just seemed like it...it didn't sound like it was it sounded like a echoe...but it was nice i still liked the first one a lil better i ain't hatin though

it aint workin right now ill try again later

Yoo the other track Hey now is cool...not feelin the hook, Jon Young And J.Cash beat right?

not sure bout the beat on that one man

Not too bad. It was better than some of the stuff you were puttin out weeks back. It's also good to hear you tryin to exercise double-up vocals. I use those too...but the thing about them is you gotta mix 'em in real subtle. You don't want them to sound too over-bearing on the track. Just put them low, so there's a slight emphasis on the word(s).

The thing about doin Pac songs is the fact that it's Pac. haha He's an almost impossible act to follow. So it's not always the best interest of an artist to select a song that someone huge did, and try to follow it or re-make it. Cuz it'll always seem less compared to the original. Not sayin ur tryin to out-due Pac...I know that's not ur intention...I'm just sayin that it's hard for underground artists to do and attatch their names to tracks like these cuz of the whole "status" thing. (if you know what I'm sayin)

Need to learn ur song and lyrics though...double-ups weren't spit as good as they could've been. Volume was decent...I could hear you. (And that's always a plus) Just need to get ur mixing down.

thanks 4 the feed man^ and yea i wasnt tryna like out-shine or do nething like that with this track,just wanted ta make my own ya kno?but thanks 4 the feed man apperciate it

for a re make...its pretty decent....it sounds like u got an effect on ur vocals tho...maybe its jst dat headset mic ur usin....u did a decent job at the double ups here n there...but there were some points where it was off n sounded jumbled...u also could up ur vocals a bit more too...dere pretty low....over all tho...it could use some work..but def da best ive heard from u so far....keep it up man

btw...u gonna be done wit ur verse?...i neeed it!..lol

yea man ill have that verse done soon hopefully 2morrow cuz i fixed that problem so,but thanks 4 the feed