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Fake Shit
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:46 am
by Cee4
This ones dedicated to these rappers who claim there killers and claim their ballin when they barley sold 2 records.
Wannabe thugs sold an eighth bag of weed and call it a hustle
So much pain in their life, one relative dies and they call it a struggle
Their sad and cant face it, they have boring lives, so they exaggerate it
They cant take it, using rap to replace it, comin hard with that fake shit
They got no wife and no son, they`ve got no knife and no gun
They don't live their life on the run, they live their life like a nun
They don't rhyme what they`ve done, their just some good actors
They aint seen no hood factors, in the hood they'd look backwards
All day they hit marijuana, Talkin bout the glitz and the glamour
Claimin their sick with the drama, how the bullets spit from the llama
Murder! They claim that they do this shit, while wearing a crucifix
bold rugged ruthless kids?, more like a cold blooded stupid bitch
They`ll tell you how they do a bitch, on the real they aint foolin me
Committing acts of foolery, it aint cool to me to hire fake jewellery
It's the same old fake shit, from nearly every newbie rapper
But in the end its only entertainment so does it really matter?
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:36 am
by Haz
LMAO!!!
" Wannabe thugs sold an eighth bag of weed and call it a hustle " < Dis Shit Had me Diein
u Came Real As fuck in Dis Piece Exposin da Shit outta Niggaz.
itz Good To Express How you Feelin about a Certain Subject
Fav Lines
They aint seen no hood factors, in the hood they'd look backwards
All day they hit marijuana, Talkin bout the glitz and the glamour
Claimin their sick with the drama, how the bullets spit from the llama
Murder! They claim that they do this shit, while wearing a crucifix
bold rugged ruthless kids?, more like a cold blooded stupid bitch
O Yeah & Ask Plex Wud Hood Hez Eva Fucked Wid Lmfao
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:36 am
by thaphantom
haz..why u hatin on plex...yo nice drop...this goes for alot of people on here....
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:47 am
by thaphantom
i'm a hater? Nigga suck a dick
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:55 am
by thaphantom
You shoulda knew what I meant by that damn do i have to break everything down to you fucking noobs
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:12 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Okay not bad..Topic was an alright choice, some of the shit could have been stated a bit better. Some metaphors/similes could have been alot better. But some shit was just true story, so it still connected. Not bad man
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:56 am
by Arvincible
All day they hit marijuana, Talkin bout the glitz and the glamour
Claimin their sick with the drama, how the bullets spit from the llama
Murder! They claim that they do this shit, while wearing a crucifix
bold rugged ruthless kids?, more like a cold blooded stupid bitch
It's the same old fake shit, from nearly every newbie rapper
But in the end its only entertainment so does it really matter?
^^that was the highlight of ya drop
Anyways this was a good piece overall, great flow as always and dope concept.
funny how phantom said that after ur drop lol
good stuff man, it was a nice read. keep it up.
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:44 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
Wannabe thugs sold an eighth bag of weed and call it a hustle
So much pain in their life, one relative dies and they call it a struggle
Their sad and cant face it, they have boring lives, so they exaggerate it
It's the same old fake shit, from nearly every newbie rapper
But in the end its only entertainment so does it really matter?
good shit like haz said you came mad real in this shit
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:52 pm
by Brah-Vo
Shit was NICE man,
Some Real shit
It was raw.
But i gotta admit, this hit me hard coz im like this haha!
Shit was nice overall, flow was nice
Multis were tight etc etc.
Nice work cee.
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:46 am
by Cee4
lol Raiza. i wasnt directing this at you or anything
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 6:39 am
by Momeijah
Wannabe thugs sold an eighth bag of weed and call it a hustle
So much pain in their life, one relative dies and they call it a struggle
Their sad and cant face it, they have boring lives, so they exaggerate it
They cant take it, using rap to replace it, comin hard with that fake shit
They got no wife and no son, they`ve got no knife and no gun
They don't live their life on the run, they live their life like a nun
Lmao^^^ All True. Especially The Bold Part. This Was My Favourite Section Of The Verse, The Rest Didn't Really Match Up To Me Even Though it Was Good. Last 2 Bars Were Dope Though, And The Last Was Placed Perfectly.
Steady Flow And Consistent Multis The Whole Way Through, Some Good Points Raised And Like i Said u Executed The Bold Bars The Best Since u Kept it Simple And it's Not Gnna Fly Over Any Heads.