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Sample Untitled Verse By Big P For The Upcoming Track

Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:33 pm
by BigP
Lyrics:

When i was little, never thought about rollin wit thugs//
always told my parents, id never do any kind of drugs//

lived in new york till i was 13 then moved to the suburbs//
now im always stayin high, jus smokin me some herbs//

youd never think I was a hustla, always kept to myself//
makin money aint easy, but i gotta bring in my wealth//

I gotta bad temper, writin some bars releaves my stress//
My homie just got arrested for drugs, now he all over the ny press//

Had to keep moving from house to house, always kept gettin evicted//
Ever since I was 8 been livin in a bad hood, kept gettin convicted//

Grew up around alot of bloods and crips, now i rocken they way of life//
Tryna change my life, and correct alot of things in my past and make em right//

Lindenhurst where I come from but is also referred to Murderhurst//
Always seein my homies gettin killed, nobody ever hearda worse//

Before you start runnin ya mouth about how Long Island aint shit//
Lemme explain this, where I come from, I lived wit the whole mix//

no Disrespect, but on my block, I was the only white family//
even though I was diffrent, I chilled with the rite family//

I gotta bright future, ownin alota cars, one for every bitch//
one for everyday of the week, and throughout the seasons, they switch//

Piture myself ownin a couple homes throughout the states//
with that many, I get to pick in which crib i wana to stay at//

Once I get rich, ill be makin more then both your parents got saved up//
When my children need something, im jus like an atm, always paid up//

Comin from new york, why you thinkin im gettin called Urban Soulja?//
No matter how many times they knock me over, i wont die cuz im a soldier//

Once I die, itll be like im still livin cuz my music will never get old//
20 years after im gone, people will still pump to my hits cuz they still bold//



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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:12 pm
by Dead Silence
yo man first of all post full tracks itd be better

2nd vocals are 2 low
3rd use non famous beats

nuff said

Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:15 pm
by thaphantom
never.....ever...wtf....dude you sound like the dude from malibu's most wanted...you and dead silence...yall both are trying to hard...that's too long of a verse first of all....unless ur a fast rapper....you not even on beat...you tried to record straight through dont do that...up your vocals more or speak up stop trying to make ur voice hood or deep...dont talk about stuff you ain't been through...what was you hustlin? sellin pokemon cards? come on man...i dont understand it...sorry for the bad feed..it's the truth...listen to other peoples audio's on here like kurse....he's a good example...he's on beat...dont try to be something your not...if u need help trying to write lyrics..dont just go for words that ryhme try to do it smart...i may not be the best battle artist or what not...but audio's i'm good at....

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:00 am
by Cee4
^^^^^
agree with this guy

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:10 am
by -TraMaTiK-
for all we kno big p iz a hugeeee mafia boss known by almost every crime leader in the world..lmfao yea right..newayz...big P...sighs..listen up peter griffin,dont sound so ughh,MONOTONE..@least TK had some kinda emotion in his even if it wuz half ass..u were barely on beat too.u need 2 learn how 2 fully ride a beat b4 u go attemptin more audio,not sayin u shudnt do more b4 that but..it wud be easier trust me.um..idk what 2 say really..keep tryin?question iz juz lingerin around..lol,not tryna put u down but maybe audio isnt ur thing..which iz cool cuz i wuz told the same thing by some ppl but idc.i kept tryin and kept droppin and i learned more on what 2 do n what not 2 do and eventually i dropped a track or whatever a good majority of the ppl thought wuz decent.u gotta strive for that man,u wanna drop somethin on here or have a crowd of ppl go..'damn ok thats u now??nice man' im not gonna lie 2 u when i say IFFFF u keep tryin and learn 2 ride a beat n buy a new mic,u might just get what u want from the ppl here..weather it be hate or love,keep doin u..i guess,peace

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:34 pm
by Brah-Vo
Yo P ..
I wont say anything new coz pretty much everyone has said everything.
My advice: Listen to advice.

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:40 pm
by Haz
Yo Yall Some Fuckin Homos Fa'real
Instead Helpin Da Dood Out u Try & Take Shots At Um

Fuck All Yall Niggaz & Ya Sad Audio Attempts


FUCK WID ME

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:42 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
-.HaZarD.- wrote:Yo Yall Some Fuckin Homos Fa'real
Instead Helpin Da Dood Out u Try & Take Shots At Um

Fuck All Yall Niggaz & Ya Sad Audio Attempts


FUCK WID ME
if u read what i said u'd see i aint tryna degrade him

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:43 pm
by Brah-Vo
Me neither. Just told him to listen to advice. For long people have been tellin him on how to improve and it's like he doesnt listen.

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:06 pm
by MesaR
-.HaZarD.- wrote:Yo Yall Some Fuckin Homos Fa'real
Instead Helpin Da Dood Out u Try & Take Shots At Um

Fuck All Yall Niggaz & Ya Sad Audio Attempts


FUCK WID ME
Iv'e never seen you post a song in creation chamber.

Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:17 pm
by thaphantom
i haven't seen him post either...and i'm tellin kid the truth...i mean i gave advice too...

Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:24 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
dont post shit that you stutter on lmao

Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:38 pm
by Haz
Sequence Dats Why u Ran Away From Are Battle Homie?
Fuckin Lil Kid Man ..