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So many things that I wish I could change.
Things wont ever be the same and that's ashame.
Right now lost in a circle.
I'm tired of being hurt too.
Can't change the fact that i'm emotional.
Truthfully I don't know what to do.
Loving you seems to be what's right.
You don't see through my eyes iight?

Please you can't judge the fact that I drop tears.
Open hearted and minded you see my fears.
Everyone know that i've been through alot of pain.
The truth is everyday I go more and more insane.
I don't know how else to express my feelings.
Can you help my heart with it's healing.
All the time I have so many thoughts just rushing through my head.
Love, Ha my love for you is full, but yours for me is what's dead.

this is jus like the other one, lol still basic and kinda bland.. try to get deeper in meanins n shit

Not bad. Thing you have to work on the most is using better wordplay and spicing up your lines.