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16 Bars...

Due Line ONE HOUR once both Checked in..

No Dick Ridin.. No Flippin.. No Hate Votes...

Vote All Cats.. Not No "3" Cat Bullshit K??

Punchelines
Flow
Metaphors
Wordplay
Multies
Creativity

AND PERSONALS.

CHECK

somebody state what the cats are before i check in. im not about to get stiched up again

Punchelines
Flow
Metaphors
Wordplay
Multies
Creativity

Punchelines
Flow
Metaphors
Wordplay
Multies
Creativity

AND PERSONALS.

CHECK

Get burned Like a Cig C u Won against Big P, u Nice Stop it? you Gotta "D'Q Slide" ya Firs Time Vs Prophet
Cee Beat Fabolicious This Fag-is-Vicious? Give um a Mic He'll Choke Hard like a GAGGIN MISTRISS...

"Texties" r Rappaz< Doesnt Make Sense see Dress up As Shady u Still Cant be anotha "EM..C"
Cut the beef out like SLASHIN COWS u Cant Mic it up?? illests William Hungs Even RAPPIN NOW! ( Raiza)

Lloyds ya Father SHANK YO DAD puta sign on u " Wachovia,Peoples," Since u Wana be BANKS SO BAD.
He got Fuckd ina porno Dis "STAR DONE" like its Me & My wifeys baby u Got Mashed on by "R SON.."

He Hittin on guys Whuts "SONS SEX?!" he Ain Tellin Tom 2 Get on When he Yellz "CUM - PLEX!!"..
u Ain Blowin Bills deres "A-YAY-LESSIGE" Da Only Way u Puttin Papa up is ya Aim "AWAY MESSIGE!"

Cee4 Explodes Ova-Sum-Men Hes in Denial sayin "i gota girlfriend" Like Tim McGraw "Ova & Ova AGAIN"
u Must be Real drunk "Feelin da Jin" how u post "THEIFS THEME" When ya Ass ain even STEALIN A WIN!?!

To show Imagery i "Flair Ports" Dis Sucka Like a Chick Boxin a Dood He Ain At All a FAIR SPORT..
poor Fuc i needa Strt "Providin coats" u Ain Say shit Till We Strted Beefin About Dick "RIDING VOTE".

Airin him Out Like im "Fifty Vents" he Ain on My Stage i Guess hez PARIS? And Im FIFTY CENT..
Pic up a Mic & Toss u Off-Kid, Talkin Shit u "Almost Made a Point" Like Dat nigga Randy MOSS-DID

slice him By da Neck so Dis "Dyke-A-HEAD" he On Everyone's Dick Somethin ( LIKE-A-HEAD).
i'll Drop Ya G, Roll up Wid 1 Niggah & Night Vision Whisperin Nigga u Wana "SPOT-A-TEE"..

Like a Bisexual hes "GOIN NUTS" Think im Goin But im Pure Raw Son ya FLOWINS CUT.
Cut Flowin Out-Ya-Day u'll be Pullin ya Hair Cryin like U's a Fiend who Ran Outta- Yay..

Your a South Beat Cus im "SNAPPIN on u" Ya Crew Fell Off Lyk ya ass "SNAPED ON a DUE"
Know When dat CHOPPER PACKD u'll be ina (Redcoat) HA! ya Relatives is "LOBSTER BACKS"

im Tha Kitchen Baker u "Spittin Grerater"? Herez a Tip Cee Like im Known Fa Tippin Waitors
u Wont get Saved by da Bell stop "BITCHIN SLATOR" u'll Miss a Win den End up MISSIN LATER

im Sensin Tears Son ( SENSITIVE?) Due 2 Dis battle he Handin Me Cash Like he Got RENT TA GIVE
one Thing for Sure u Ain "Seein Me" lyk ya X CHIC Lyk a Virus page u Out da Box i Gotta X QUICK

Im Dead..Right When i Sed i'll Leave u Dead Right ur Gunless i Treat Dis Shit Like a LED FIGHT
u Couldnt ( C ME) if u Wus a Crip Boss i'll Have u Behind Bars Like u Traded Places wit RICK ROSS

Wheres your 40 CAL-U-HATER u Bein a Gangsta Ain Addin Up Right Like a Broken CAL-CU-LATOR..
tear dis Phoney He Aint Wana get Caught in da "Crossfire" like a black Ata KKK SER-I-MONi..

im Greezy With lines i'll Send CEE-4 Da Rappa down south so he can feel like WEEZY WIT RHYMES.
Elevation Wise Cee you Neva Rose a Spark ya Skills Wouldnt Move Like Dey Wus ROSA PARKS..

u Speedin Past Me?? Not Even ina Fast-Car ur Garbage bitch i Dont even needa Finish Dis Last Bar

He gets no love so he wants to be hated, the villian like kids-hate-on-Darth-Vader
Bitch See ya later, he must be in the Bermuda triangle coz hes aint-on-mah-radar
He gotta be mad he wanna go 16 bars, u think im gonna let this gay-ho-get-in-ta-me
two things I got that he don't, a loss figure lower than my age and my anal-virginity
Just like his beef with Plex n Kurse, after I shit on him I`ll bet-he-surrenders
He aint tough the only time he was strapped he was dressed-in-suspenders
I seen ya skinny ass on you tube, Fight me, I suggest that-u hit the gym-son
What the fuck I cant believe I got net beef with Apu from the Simpsons
spunk blockin his airways, maybe that's why he finds it hard to swallow-his-pride
I`ll give him a skull bashin, crack that shit open wide and find out its hollow-inside
Sayin I only beat newbies n rookies, this hypocrite-guy`s-got-some-nerve
I beat Rhino n Ghost, Domino n Smoke, u little-shit-my-props-deserved
Beefin with Sharpe, next day apologisin, u wont see me fall-back-kiss-n-make-up
Its time u gave up, were u talkin bout your dick or his when u called-that-written-Raiz-up
Go ahead drop an audio, it`ll only boost my ego to hear a little mad-at-me-song
He wont be mad-at-me-long, soon Haz`ll-be-gone I`ll get rid of u bud like a gravity-bong
on my dick, u even voted for me when I lost to Plex, its inscribed in ya-head-im-betta
This is the third time you lost whats next, I`ll make u pray to the UK instead-of-mecca
Following me round the site like a lost puupy, heres a bar lets-see-u-go-fetch-that
In the Battle of the stretched bars, im droppin weight that`ll Leave-u-with-stretch-marks
Ya user title says ur an animal, on some WWF shit, im the UK foreign Legion-of-Doom
Its on! i bet ya leave-from-the-room, he aint put up a struggle since he was freed-from-the-womb
Ya rhymes aint hard hazard their haphazard, a shit talker I like him when he sticks-to-that
But He wanna be judged on what fits-his-raps, hes just like a vet coz he wanna fix-the-cats (get it)
Im a threat n u better not forget it, ur like a gay sailor the way you choke-on-seamen
27 n 10, my record gets me credit ,while u been here over a year and just broken-even
Whether it's a battle or in the scriptures we can go to war, im in my Khakis-and-proud
So you sayin u Wanna use house rules, well my house is clean theres no pakis-allowed
That was just a lesson in battle rappin, surely Wild Bill-have-ta-sticky-that
Thanks for the battle, now its time u went back to the till-at-the-Kwik-E-mart

ThatGuyYouHate wrote:Punchelines-Haz
Flow-Neither... Lotta Shit Forced in Both Verses.. And if You Think There Wasnt i Can Point it Out To Ya...
Metas/Sims-Haz
Wordplay-Haz
Multies-Cee4
Creativity-Cee4
Personals-Tie.. Both Pretty Much Came With Nothin But Personals...

if Ya Want Me To Break This Down Any Further i Will Just Say Somethin.. i'll Break Down Each Bar if Ya Want Me To Dont Really Care... Nice Battle From Both Sides Though.. Lotta Punches And Personals Which is Kinda Suprisin Cuz With A 16 Bar Battle You'd Expect Alot A Filler.. There Was Some But Not As Much As Expected.... Anyways Props Ta Both Of Ya...

Vote-Hazard

right u said u wold break it down if we want. well i want u to

right cheers TGYH for breakin it down. i respect your opinion. this is not the place for arguing so i`ll leave it at that.

2-0 hazard uppin

Punchelines-cee
Flow-cee
Metas/Sims-Haz
Wordplay-Haz
Multies-Cee
Creativity-cee
Personals-Cee


Vote: cee

right 1-1 uppin

no more freeposts lol

Punchelines:haz
Flow: sucked
Metaphors:haz
Wordplay:haz
Multies: cee4
Creativity: haz

haz:
Airin him Out Like im "Fifty Vents" he Ain on My Stage i Guess hez PARIS? And Im FIFTY CENT..
Pic up a Mic & Toss u Off-Kid, Talkin Shit u "Almost Made a Point" Like Dat nigga Randy MOSS-DID <<< that was kinda lame..didnt like it very much

the rosa parks line was pretty nice tho

cee 4:
on my dick, u even voted for me when I lost to Plex, its inscribed in ya-head-im-betta << i doubt u complained when voted for u..so ur basically dissin urself 1) u lost to plex 2) a dude is apparently ridin ur dick and u were okay with it at one point?..okkay

the while paki and kwik-e-mart thing, are u serious?....... PLAYED

i think haz took this off creativity alone

2-1 (Me)

Uppin for Votes

Punchlines:Haz
Flow: Haz
Metas/Sim: Haz
Wordplay: Haz
Multies: Cee4
Personals: Cee4
Creativity: Haz

v/ HAZARD

i've Seen Better From Both Of Yall ..No Hate But HaZ Shitted All Ova Cee4's Head And Placed Him N His Casket ..