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6 bars...house rules
No biting...flippin...hate votes.

Vote on the cats of

*Flow
*Entertainment
*Wordplay and originality


Let's do dis 2 hours after both check in

-check-

Here's mine

I spit venom like a cobra/
And I dont need more than 2 lines to declare this rap game over/
This bra rolls in the hood thinkin hes so fly/
But hes known as dennis rodman cos hes "the rebound guy",/

bra likes to think hes cold as ice, just gets sacrificed/
hes been setup more times than obie trice/
the guys a mistake of epic proportions/
makes his momma wish she'd had one of them back street abortions/

My lyrics are dope, like grade a drugs/
I got more classes in my bedroom than mj does
NYC, You can't beat my verbal showers
I'm the Boeing 747 to your twin towers/

This nigga talkin bummy, but all i can do is sit and laugh//
accepted this shit like a dummy, obviously Young just don't know the Half//*

I shoot off wit the shit talk, heavier than glock-nine's//
you can't stop mines! Hell...Haz already caught u stealin otha niggaz Rhymez//**

But I don't mind the battle, fuck it...i got sum time to waste//
we all know this kids gonna search deep into illest, Copy, then come back and Paste//

Goin around beggin for apologies, nigga you must be soft//***
This niggaz rhymes, swag and style 'bout as real as Lara Croft//

Fallback n' git played, I rep the Chi where street-souljaz git made//
u want dat rap-forum fame. but biters like you get treated like shit-stains//

for this rap shit, i live it! To you, it's just a faze//
bite anotha nigga again, I'ma come ova, smack ur mom and make dat bitch give my nuts braids//

Explainations:

*Play on his name
**He's been caught biting rhymes already
***Been crying in the threads, apologizing for biting

Weak Battle, Kurse Obviously Half-Assed This.

Lemme Start With YH's Verse, ur Spitting Ain't THAT Bad And u Have Some Potential. But Really ur Whole Verse Was Just indirect Basic Punches. ur Last 2 Bars Were Pretty Trash Aswell, Those Two Bars Could've Been Used To Attack Kurse Personally. u Should've Used ur imagination, The Dude Has His Picture in His Avatar And u Didn't Even Try To Make a Diss Out Of it. Basically, Use All The Ammo u Have, Especially When ur New And Don't Know The Guys ur Facing.

Kurse u Could've Wiped ur Ass On a Notepad And Probably Had a Better Verse Than This. i Can't Really Blame u For Not Trying But This is Probably ur Worst Ever Verse Lol, Just Had To Say. as Far as Disses Go, it's a Cat Sweep To u. The Lara Croft Line Was Kinda Funny Only Because There Are a LOT Of Nerds Out There Who Wish She Was Real. 1st Bar Was Aright For Hyping Yourself, Rest Was Mediocre. But Meh, it Was a Case Of u Having What He Didn't Have And That Was Some Direct Disses.

And Direct Disses Win Battles, Vote - Kurse.

kidddd another cat sweep against you!! oh well better luck next time.

vote goes to kizzurse

Closed n Updated.

Why didnt you lock the topic if the battles over?

i Have The Memory Of a Goldfish With Dementia.