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Post by Dead Silence »

just a little song i did i personally think that this is one of my best ones
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Post by Omega Bill »

I just really think you don't have the voice for rap man..

Your flow seems choppy and you fall off alot. The chorus was mind numbingly annoying. Your voice burns holes in my eardrums.

I'm sorry man, keep trying, I'm not gonna shit on you completely...but I dunno how you're gonna improve.

In the mean time, answer my text call out. I need another win on my record.
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Post by Nasty-Caramel69 »

yo man yo name iz dead silence and u makin a song called white noise?

that doesn't make sense
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Post by MesaR »

quality was much better man.. i acutally felt the flow of the song for a while it was the hook.. i like how u change your styling slightly but it sounds tacky.. iff u could get an effect under your voice that would make it clearer it would be pretty solid..

dont really know there jj is going with that mickey thing lol, but naw this is the first song by you that i didnt close down half way so props of that man.. ur getting better keep it up an keep dropping
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Post by Dead Silence »

thankx seq. and everyone else fuck ya alright i no i dont have the voice for it but i dont give to shits and TGYH i did take ppls advice my flow is better than it was and all that other shit so u need to compare that to my old shit before u go and say shit
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Post by Omega Bill »

You wanna talkin about shit? We're talkin bout shit? Shit...shit...we're talking bout shit...

Back it up then and answer my call-out Mr. Tough nuts.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

well i didn't hear it.. i really dont want to haha, but if its better, then that's all that should matter.. such as my tracks.. each new track i do is better then the last... all u can really do is improve.. or give up and quit
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Post by Dead Silence »

im not tryin to start shit its just that u ppl are sayin shit.
like Smoke said its about improving
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Post by Dead Silence »

yeah thats wat i want
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Post by Haz »

Man Ain None of Yall Fuckin wid Me Audio wise..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

^^^ Then post a fucking audio instead of just saying that.
Post up your bodybags freestyle. You were listening to it before.
Prove it to us.
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Post by Haz »

lol Prove it 2 yall For Wut???
your No1 2 Prove Anythin 2.. 2 Be honest..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Well fucking back up your claims, else people will see you as a fraud. The fucks the poitn of saying "cant touch me audio wise" if u dont post up any audio? Lmfao.

Where's the logic in that?
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Post by Haz »

lol its Called Facts Kid, Facts
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Post by Viral »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:lol its Called Facts Kid, Facts

n u still havent dropped a damn thing...not to mention that verse u was posed to record for u n Ekoms to battle....
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