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8 bars - 16 lines
due in 3 days

alrite people. ive went and broke my laptop again. i need to get a new screen so i dont know how long thats gonna be. im on someone elses computer right now. so whats the script with this. is it 8 bars dissin each emcee (16 overall) or 8 bars dissin the two. (8 bars overall) i

i dont know if i`ll make the 3 days deadline but i`ll definitly get it done and posted by the weekend

Todays Day 3... ima Lay my Verse Down..

Hazard
Ill make u a Hells Angel who took ya bike, im worse than a NiGhTmArE, leave u more than spooked tonight
Who booked this dyke, hes too shook ta fight, like his brother on youtube runnin from a Big P look a like//

Fuck ya persona, ur no deranged savage, killed by plex kurse rhino the list is endless, ya names damaged
I`ll even be kind n say ya spit games average, but Paki this ya date with death call it an arranged marriage//

female tendencies, is Shaz short for Sharon , basic instincts for Sharon to get stoned n start flashin her pussy
u been here for ages, its still like smashin a rookie, we take turns to smoke ya like we`re passin the duchie//

love notes to Raiza, proves ur a queer, still makin audio callouts, i`ll bet u don't have a track out this year
Typin ebonics, u aint black now be clear, only time ya relatives been cotton pickin they cleaned wax out ther ear

Gutta
fake gangsta rappin bout guns, I aint a bit stressed, in truth hes further in the closet than my bitch dress
compare our records, aint no way this kids blessed, n we woulda beat EVIL if it wasn't for his shit verse//

my punches put u in ER, waitin in line to get ya jaw fixed, ur wack, ya talents harder to find than Lawgix
fabricated stories bout a life of crime, u talk shit, n how long u gonna recycle them same rhymes from Topix//

im takin command, he cant type, fear got him shakin his hand, its off the Richter the way im quaking his land
GOW got potential,my patience is grand, sorry Rhino,if it was up to me theres no way hed be makin the band//

both them scared to drop first, their too busy flappin, but since I seen the draw i got, I aint stopped laughin/

pair of e thugs detached from reality, the Truman show is back, and both bout as lost as a women with a map/

This Is My House You ( Lack Rent) Lyk a Confusin 50 Show We Cant Undastand ya (ACKCENT)
u bettah Knock it Off Quick Like Gota (PACK LENT) Like u A Drinka Whea ya (PACK WENT?!)

Gears Of War! Yall XBox Fanaticz Into "Game Systems" i'll Write a Note 2 illest P..S...2 Lamez Missin
If We Go Punch For Punch Plex'll Have To Amp Yo Arms u Will Neva Da Champ No Harm

C u Spazzin Cus My Punchlines? u Dont WANNA BE CALM Oh Yeah I Forgot u WANNA BE DOM
What will Dis Wanna B Palm? (its Like i Flash a myspace url) how i Let ya MAMA-SEE-TOM

See Dem Curtins Dead u'll Be For Certin,Ain Movin Me "Tell Me Who PEE WEE iz JERKIN!?"
no Need for Dis Beef like bad Cattle, Lyk Da Vice Pres. pure (DICK VOTEZ) in da LAST BATTLE.

LISTEN!!..

Gutt-Kurt They Screamin (YOU SUCK) Knowin he Ain "John Cena" Nigga Getz BUTT HURT..
Worm-ya-Bait Lil Fishes Swerm n Take(Like Reall Money Launderin) My Time dont CONCERN A FAKE!

Ova Lightin Candles is wen u "BURNIN CAKE" Put Dis Parasite ina Jar Like Im Learning Lakes
ya Skillz ain "Turnin Strait" Like a Pitiful Mexican u Sayin "How Long Will Dis (EARNIN TAKE!)

In Cee Or Gutta i Dont See no Gutta "Have Um Los in da Sea" Like Dey NEMOS BROTHAZ
Couldnt Bring "Heat 2 Niggahz" If At Da Clinic Dey KEMO'D OTHAZ..

i bet gutta aint even seen this. uppin

well i guess its cee4 vs Hazard here, i wish people signed in to be active for this shit.


Cee dropped bombs in personals
RS was better today in wordplay
Creativity goes to Cee by a bar
most entertainment to Cee
Punches goes to Cee also just by a thread.


V. goes to Cee4

i aint even seen this shit thanks for tellin a fool bout dis shit

i was gonna drop but i guess i cant no mas

ay man i dont even know whats goin on with this, ppl are droppin after past three days. So might s well drop one before its too late, if you do ill take the vote back if your shit makes a difference

It's obvious, nobody was DQ'ed. You should have left it at that and dropped Gutta.

Now you're officially out.

Uppin for votes.

Cat sweep to C4.

Had better punches and personals and his flow was more consistent. Seemed like you really half assed this Hazard, you've dropped way better stuff then this.

ah fuck it, lemme know next time fuckers!

Punches: Cee4
Flow: Haz
Personals: Cee4
Vote: Cee4

goin wit the 4bars against each other it goes:

punches- cee4
personals- cee4
flow- cee4

vote: cee4

cat sweep! nice verse C