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Two Styles (free/key-style)

Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:28 pm
by .:Fade:.
10 barz..... another one yall wont like... i thought this was ATLEAST DECENT..... prolly not to yall tho...

im wildin out....
Im really a son-ofa-bitch, an im neva gon snitch //
Trigger a gun an i twitch, leave ur body ina ditch //
No im jus kiddin, im only violent when i need be //
Im like a villain, i go out at nite so u cant see me //
My flows a go-go and u know im oh so fuckin loco //
My shit goes an flows hoe, im high, i still feel low tho //
Ima luny an i can have anyone say oh shit oh no //
Im so crazy, litterly, i still think i live wit ocopogo // (an unknown aminal)
I jus keep freestylein out of my hottdamn mind //
Im still free an out wildin, jus snortin coke lines //
Still dealin with broke times, an so i poke vines // (shootin up my veins)
My lyrics croke minds, even when i joke rhyme //


ima complex perfectionist.....
I got complexity rhymes, an i got supernatural skills //
With perplexity like lines, an i give supersexual trills //
Ima master with this craft, kind of lika perfectionist //
My shit long last, i throw ur ass out lika rejectionist //
Im spiritually versatile, and jus i do not accept rejection //
U aint worthwhile, kats copy me like an exact reflection //
I just fuckin beguile, like being influenced by neglection //
My skills compile, lunatic luna-tech, ima perfect selection //

Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:30 pm
by complexity
The last was better than the first, didn't have the best flow, but some nice rhymes.

Im spiritually versatile, and jus i do not accept rejection //
U aint worthwhile, kats copy me like an exact reflection //

that was probably my favorite line, pretty creative, keep at it man, you always get better

8/10