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6-8 Bars.. No Flippin..No dick Ridin/or Hate Votes... This is My Check in..
Due time is 24 Hours.. Lets Get it...

Listen...

Why This Loser in a Winna Race? Like McDonalds on News He anotha Fuckin Dinna Case
I Wus Seein you While u Said "A..B...D.." Cause you got Passed by ( C BY A MILE..)


Ya " Bars Vincable" you Aint Invincable Check ya illest Name you (ARE...VINCABLE...)..
u At court Like this is a Trial Fill,hows ur Style ill?? You ain Much betta Than WILD BILL...

i Dont Mean to Hurt ya Feelins, so he cant Type "Chop his off hands" Like the Jerk wus Stealin..
is He Winning??! You'll Be Puttin Up ya (NO'S) Up Like its Perks Im Dealing....

you Try & Spit a Rap i'll Shit in ya Mouth Mouse Like it Wus a Civil War OUT HOUSE...
u Slippin Like ya Hands is Sweaty You'll be dropin to da Ground like "mans is Wet B"..

You Cant "Hang in The Sky" ( Group Sexs) Da Only Time your "BANGIN WITH GUYS"..
(Cherry, Pumpkin, Blueberrys..When your Slangin Dem Pies I Kno This Truth wont be Changin ya Lies..

Im Just Airrin you Out Like a "ROOM A SMOKE" Theres a Ruma Joke U Get Done Like Shroomz n Coke..
See i Dont get Writers Bloc but i Block ya Writer Cause its Like im Tha Key i Lock-Ya-Cypher...

i Said this is Murda but not in one Line i Stated "Usin a Gun" Like a Drunk Father Im Abusing My Son..
Like Healthy People you'll Be Choosin to Run, i'll Fill a Gas Tank Wit Liquid When Ya Oozin is Done...

Leave ya Head-a-Core this "Fruits Peeld", Aint Strait Like his Gay Ass Cant Gettah Whore
My Punchlines Line Tomb Stonez Dood in This Room Ownd Tyme 2 Sweep Tha Garbage im Tha BROOM HOMEZ

Wait. Are those really "BARS" ur puttin up?! I see 13 separate bars!! Oh well




Look here dumbass, it's 'Arvincible', get ya names in right/*
Ill make the flame ignite shoot you plain in sight, cuz my aim is right//

See this bro's-quick, flow's-sick, got you chokin cuz this smoke's-thick/
Sorry ass been here since '06 and still continues to smoke-dick.//

Check this slow-prick, Arvincible came here just-in-time to punch-in-lines/
And to 'just-remind' you that nobody in the world trusts-your-kind //**

No homo but lemme touch-your-minds, I can literally lyrically crush-your-rhymes
ya flow be yellow teeth i need to brush them lines, cuz ur just rust-and-grime!

U fuckin suck, I'll leave you so bloody they be callin-ya-'Hunt's'/***
Cuz you all red like ketchup, drippin like 'em periodical-cunts,//

See i act-ill, stack-kills, more chronic than takin the daily crack-pills/
Hazard will just get a smacked-grill, cuz i run it harder than the track-field//

This bitch better start actin-real, cuz we all know pakis got no rappin-skills/
ya brain's lackin-cells, my fire make you feel like you trapped-in-hell//

Dawg I just destroyed you wit nothin but multis, popped right in the bull's-eye/
you no bigger than a bull-fly, damn...I made another one of them fools-cry.//


* He spelled my name "Arvincable" in the post...wtf
** Pakistanis...no need to explain.
*** 'Hunt's Ketchup'

U Lost Buddy.. i Said No Flippin..
But Dont Count it.. im Jus sayin for Future Reference if Some1 puts No flippin.. u Cant Flip one there Lines..
People will use dat To Advantage & Jus gettah Win..

Your First Line wus Flippin...


Oh Yeah.. & its Eight Bars Faggot i Didnt Kno u Couldnt Count

i didn't lose 'buddy' don't try to get bcheap with me, i'm tired of getting screwed over in this shit. You spelled my name wrong on the call out and the post, that wasn't on a flip from your verse dumbass.

YOU LOST cuz i killed you.

its not a flip if what arvincible said is true, & on the bars arv, on here and most text battling forums, text bars aren't the same as musical bars, apparently the consensus in the text world is that a bar is really two lines instead of one, i never really understood why it should be different from musical bars but generally for textcees bars are twice as long

LoL Oh i Didnt Realize i Spellt ya Name wrong .. Yeah u Aint flip..
& i Got 8 bars Up niggah...

Aite..

Can somebody vote on this shit already?!

dope battle. REALLY REALLy close its hard to vote.


Personals: Hazard ( he had more )
Punches: Hazard. Wordplay was ill, great metas and similes. Hard hitting punches.
Flow: Arv. Better multies, good structure.

Vote: Hazard. Arvincible was outclassed here.

punches & personals - haz
flow - arvincible

vote: haz

arvincible you need to work on incorperatin some personals into your punches then make your punches hit harder, cuz this verse was really on the weak side of a battle verse, haz tore you to bits

he put four rhyme schemes into a single bar, i didnt know it 'wud be considered a bar but oh well in guess its another misunderstanding.

personals - hazard
punches - hazard
flow - arvincible

vote - hazard

arvincible u need to work on punches and personals coz u already got the flow and structure good

aite cee got it