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jus wait n peep

this is straight off the dome

this was not bad. flow was good and the lyrics were straight although sometimes for a diss i think u should rap a bit slower so people can understand what your sayin better. u were rappin a bit too fast at times and i struggled to make out what u were sayin. but yeah this was good and i dont think Tramatik woulda beat this if he had accepted the battle.

beats annoying as hell & the vocals are a lil low, flow overall was straight, delivery was kinda weak needed more emphasis on the rhymes, lyrics were solid for a free, i usually hate your voice but it didn't sound as bad on this, overall its a solid free & alot better than tramatiks response so thats all that matters really

Yah. I agree with c4.

I wasn't feeling this that much, but a lot of things were better.

I hated the beat as well and the vocals are definitely more blended into the beat
than they are put on top of it.

yeah this was done at 12am and i was blown out off of that blue berry, and i understand that quality is shit but i have no idea how to mix and shit, so i appreciate the feed on the freestyle

uppin the feed

lol i remember dis beat..haha...it does get annoying tho...the lyrics were decent tho...it was obvious u were freestylin...dere was a part i think somewhere in da beginin dat its like u kinda start mumblin almost cuz ur not sure wtf to say...hahaha...its funny...over all tho...the vocals were pretty straight quality obviously wasnt taht great...beat woulda been good..but it was too repetetive....and i def think u killed tramatik on dis track....keep droppin tho man

appreciate the feed viral