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heres another for yall....hope it aint too soon..haha....ne ways....im on da 1st n 3rd verse...ekoms gots second...n im on da hoooook....feed would be appreciated.....enjoy


Mixed and Produced by:Viral

its like... the Chorus wus Aiight.. i Dunno how to Explain it i Wusnt Feelin it To Much..

Your verses Were Pretty strait u Rode da Beat Righ n Shit Viral.. i Wusnt Feelin Ekoms Verse..

Over All this Wus a Pretty Strait Track.. Keep Doin Yall

lovin this shit man, got that on my mp3 player

rhymes were on point, flow was nice, n sounds like theres more mic presence than usual so its awsome

ekoms shocked me with his verse, never woulda guessed it was him if i wasnt told it was

overall, just likin the track

keep bumpin em out man

mos def the hottest track you put out man.... ekoms verse was pretty tight, 2x better then the last one, ur 2 verses were dope ass fuck

PrecisE wrote:lovin this shit man, got that on my mp3 player

rhymes were on point, flow was nice, n sounds like theres more mic presence than usual so its awsome

ekoms shocked me with his verse, never woulda guessed it was him if i wasnt told it was

overall, just likin the track

keep bumpin em out man

word...im glad u like it....spread it around!..haha

~Symbolikull~ wrote:mos def the hottest track you put out man.... ekoms verse was pretty tight, 2x better then the last one, ur 2 verses were dope ass fuck

i appreciate it man...much thanks...be on da look out for ekoms with a solo track...should be out within the next week or so

-.HaZarD.- wrote:its like... the Chorus wus Aiight.. i Dunno how to Explain it i Wusnt Feelin it To Much..

Your verses Were Pretty strait u Rode da Beat Righ n Shit Viral.. i Wusnt Feelin Ekoms Verse..

Over All this Wus a Pretty Strait Track.. Keep Doin Yall

thanks for the feed man....be on da look out for more

Viral was electric on this track.

Ekoms verse reminded me of some of his real old shit.
Especially the first few bars. Creative verse.

Virals lyrics were pretty good throughout. I liked the last verse
better.

The chorus was pretty straight. I'm not very critical when it comes to underground
songs choruses though.

this was pretty tight. I dont think i ever heard any song ekoms did before.

firts verse: it was good. it had my head bobin a lil bit at the beginning. The lyrics were good, and you rode the beat good. a couple times you were a lil bit off, but nothing to noticeable. The only criticism i would have is, that you need to make it more exciting. Cause the lyrics are good, and you ride the beat good, but it lacks emotion. If you put emotion into it and more swagger on the beat, it would sound really tight.

ekoms: the lyrics were good. multis were there obviously. I would just say the same thing about lack of emotion. You were kinda monotone. It makes it boring, even if the lyrics are tight.

third: good verse. lyrics were on point, rode the beat good, delivery was ok, but same lack of emotion.

the hook was tight, i liked it. it was mixed and shit pretty good too, the quality was on point. Overall, it was a good track and worth a listen.

YEAH THIS WAS GOOD. VIRAL KINDA OUTSHINED EKOMS ON THIS ONE. VIRALS FLOW WAS GOOD AND THE BEAT WAS SICK. EKOMS VERSE NEVER REALLY FITTED THE TRACK. U CAN HAVE AS MANY MULTIS AS U LIKE BUT IT DONT MKE A HOT TRACK. THIS WAS DEFINTITLY THE BEST I HEARD FROM VIRAL SO FAR. ONLY CRITICISM IS I LISTENED TO THIS TWICE AND I STILL COULDNT NAME ANYTHIN BOTH U DUDES WAS TALKIN ABOUT. IF IT WERE ME ID CUT DOWN ON THE MULTIS AND SPIT SOME LYRICS THAT MEAN SOMTHIN BUT YEAH THISM WAS GOOD 8/10

That is a rhyming style though, it's mainly horror stuff.

Plus it's just complex and will take a while to get it all.

I have said "multiple times" that Viral needs to do a topical track.

I always tell Viral to post lyrics with it, but he doesn't.

whoa!...mad feed we got dis time....good shit..i appreciate all da feed....expect another track to be out soon within da next week...from both me and ekoms

uppin for some more feed

go0od shit u killed the flow viral and lyrics where hot too
ekoms u had very nice multi's to0o n ur flow was up there
u both was on point on this track,keep it up.

1st verse - flow & lyrics were on point delivery was straight, like 8th said only thing you really need to work on is getting a swagger

hook - it works but i think if the drums switched up and had a lil more bounce it would sound better

2nd verse - flow was on point for the most part, lyrics were on point, deliverys improving, still lacking mic presence though

3rd verse - same as the first basically

mixing - was straight the overdubs could've been mixed better though

beat - as i said i hate the guitar, drumline could've been better, everything else is pretty solid


cee4 has a point, i know this is your style with the eminem type shit but all the tracks ya'll make are basically on the same topic, "i'm going to do yada yada to yada yada with yada yada etc.", even when your hooks have a direction your verses tend to stray from the hooks subject, if you expanded your content and made a song on a specific topic the majority of people who listen will like it more especially if its something they can relate to, tracks like these are cool but they lack replay value because listeners won't be emotionally attached to them

thanks for the feed everyone who left it...im pretty sure ive gotten back to all of u with feed on somethin uve dropped....but if i missed ya...let me kno....and for those that havent dropped feed....DROP SOME!