Hip Hop Forum

hi people, tell me why is the light life
and the night evil, show me da guys equal
comin harder this time around than a hbo fight sequel
get out ya night light cuz my lifes evil
nice verse ima put this verse in a vice
n vice versa not guilty pleas ta da guys murda
ta my burna "pray cuz im the bird of",
fied-certi cuz rh1no and the odds defies heard of
when,who why what n how, what if up was down,
could you still stand up ta buck them rounds
cheat steal lie ta die in the muck and drown
swimmin in endless spans of obstructed sounds
reach fa the skies just ta touch the ground
believe ill leave kings stuck for crowns
in the spotlight a ringleader n business
i conduct in shrouds, the maestro of conductin clowns
i leave em plucked n bound, they missed me on earth
im as real as it gets ya heads are stuck in clouds
yall sittin chickens, better count ya ducks huh what if down was up
no pitter patter its the sound a chucks, haha UPPIN ya misfortune
hell bound or bust, put ya sorrows in a bottle n ill down ya luck

this shit was dope as fuck man, beginnin started slow, but then picked up quickly, i like the concept of it, i actually had an idea like 2 days ago to write somethin like this too, like a backwards type thing, you know... so its kool to see you get at it.. when part 2 comes around get at me maybe i can add some bars for a collab

THANKS HOMIE. N FO SHO ON THE COLLAB ILL HIT YA UP, STARTIN PT.2 SHORTLY