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check it out you bout to feel the pain
ill embed it in ya brain
i shoot hoops and im wetter than the rain
can't lie i can't explain why there's no convincin' you
you messin wit the star, its the A-R-vincible
instrumental principles, with damage in each syllable
u made of paper cuz im rippin you
you try to walk the walk but im trippin you
you flippin me off ya little homie's tippin me off
try to ride mah back faggots better get off
rest the case i leave the best left replaced
eliminate the haters got the rest erased
lockin the block down, im cockin, ya shot down
ya jockin ya cop-clowns, got glocks, cuz arvincible rocks now
recreatin hip-hop and reincarnatin rap
got the best of both worlds n there aint no toppin that
unstoppable like tryin to keep peace,
keepin niggas from drownin in deep seas
i dont do freebees im top notch in the top spot
im the bad boss that people cannot stop
see me on the court and homie u cant hang
you can have gangs, or homies with "bang-bangs"
but the truth be told ya just a two year old
im pure gold and hot ,ur shit's cold u rot,u old
my bullets leave ya brain into fractions, try
ill leave ya dead left breathless, no reaction time
try to crack this crime homie ya trapped this time
give it up imma live it cuz this rap shit's mine
imma diss whoever i want whenever i want
f*** you imma do whatever i want
not tryna be whatever im not
im not rich, but get a grip b!tch im real
makin my way up sayin whatever i feel

uhh how does this site work? hah.

welcome tha was a decent verse, it works the same as any other hip hop forum...

Word.

Technically you would post this in "The Scriptures" which is the written rhyme section, but it also works as an introduction. Allowing us an opportunity to see your skill, which incidentally I do find pretty good.

"you messin wit the star, its the A-R-vincible
instrumental principles, with damage in each syllable "

A few simple similes mixed in with some solid rhyming.

welcome how old are you. ?

Thanks man, I'm 20.

i read some of the comments and I like the shit you guys put down.
How do you set up a battle?

oh so i have to up my rep or money? through feedbacks?
my bad this is the first real rap forum i've ever been on

Hey man. Another pinoy huh?
How ya doin? Im raiza sharpe.
Welcome.

U still in the philippines?

Lol Welcome.

Kirk Hammett Pwns All Filipinos Though.

haha yeah I'm a flip but I'm in so-cal. Born n raised there though.
And Dom, that isn't polite.

Welcome.

I can't really greet ya too much because I only been here 2 months.

Battling is fun as shit. If you wanna really sharpen up your shit, go to the Diss The Emcee Above You topic in the Cyphers. It helped me get my rhyme scheme down better (which it seems you have no problem with right off the bat) but it's also better to rap against someone else just for shits and gigs instead of writing to yourself, ya know? Lot of good topics in Cyphers where you can just rhyme and diss and spruce up your lyrical prowess.

Good to have another user for sure, need more traffic going through here, ya know.

that's true, I'm always checkin up on this site, but no ones ever on, whats up wit that?

Welcome dude.

This place does have it's busy times, you just have to time it right. Different time zones and such, y'know.

welcome to the site. nice verse. u want somethin to do then battle me lol

lol aite ill battle you but you have to set it up cuz i ont know how the fuck to that lol