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Just random Diss

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 4:23 pm
by кℓαѕѕιιcк
I heard you were standin in tha block all Alone//
and im plannin 2 stick you up 4 ur money and ur mobile phone//
but tha problem is//
i aint got a knife or gun//
but i got a rusty chainsaw//
imma rip it thru ya neck//
and let tha mother fucking blood poor//

imma bit buzy but imma finish of later


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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:51 pm
by Brah-Vo
flow was choppy .. and saw and poor dont rhyme unless they're in the aussie accent.
u gotta make ur bars equal .. and ur structure needs work. but its ok. and shouldnt this be in the scriptureS?
lol.

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:11 am
by precise
yea, this shouldnt be in the cypher section

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:16 am
by Street Pharmacist
what kind of name is fabolicious for a dude?