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Summers Dying Fast (Written in one of my darker moments)
Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:34 am
by Glamtrash
being revised.
Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:38 am
by Glamtrash
References:
Nazarene: Jesus Christ.
Talons: Something similar to an animals claw.
Wrest: To take away by force.
Askew: With disapproval, scorn, contempt, etc.
Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:27 pm
by Brah-Vo
Very deep, good structure.
Your very talented.
Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:16 am
by Haz
Through acrid clouds of summer flies
The garden swells with a thousand more wise
Forever flung to celestial dreams
Clawing at the grave of the dead Nazarene
I watch the storm approaching
The darkness calls my name
The trees are growing restless
They feel the season change
Their fruit has putrified
Forbidden once and bound to die
The thread of life lies severed
On the brink of paradise
Grinning winds of hate unfurled
Dash towers tall that grip the sun
Talons stretch her veil
Reclamation, our time has come...
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