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Tramatik: Yellow
Plex: Red


Move carefully, I'm on beat, whose there with me
remember whose air ya breathe, as we move aerially
through the sky on a parachute, where are you?
as we prepare to shoot, for the stars, the chords are ours
record the bars,as you fall from the heavens
to where the shores are hard, leavin the game all to the legends
follow the veterans steppin stones, we have left
sit in our decked out thrones, walk on the steps
trip over left over bones, that smell fresh of death
respects overblown, battle with a sword if ur the best
if not keep ur mouth closed, and I'll be impressed

between heaven n hell im 3 doors down holdin Kryptonite
sayin 'i gotta rip it right with this mic i have'ta grip it tight'
i been makin rhymes,plex wuz there 2 just wastin time
cuz very few ppl listen 2 us they juz bakin lines
but aint cookin nething good they fakin lives
we holdin em under water see if they find the air
that were designed'ta share,we recline on stairs
made of gold,while listenin 2 chimes n snares
we made our spot here so dont think who this'
or look them dudes shit' cuz yall just Foolish
no need for threats cuz we kno ur fearin this
we pickin up the trashy emcees n clearin this
each line we drop iz a path 2 glory,a steppin stone
so leave the weapons home,we reppin the throne
leavin godly marks as u listen n accept the tone
of us sayin 'were good but better left alone'

Still i ride the beats, although I been vilified by these
wack emcees who kill my vibe, at least I have the will n drive to reach
building high, so many rocks thrown at me
it's like I'm chillin by the beach, that I own practically
theres no passin me, I zone tactically
I'm so comfortable on beats, I made them my home actually
go ahead and sleep, while I perform microphone savagery
when I flow naturally, sweet, feel the cavity
I'll let tramatic steal this magic beat, the realest flattery
I don't deal with average g's, or collab with bad emcees
imagine me on a track with Hazard, a tragedy
tragically tramatik after me, is rapping mastery
with rapid drastic keys, we are letting you tap in tapestry

Overall this was good.

Plex your first verse was aiight. nothin special.

The Tramatik stepped it up. Your verse flowed and you didnt look out of place alongside Plex.

Plex your second verse was way better than your first one. nothin stood out cause the whole verse was dope.

Overall everything flowed well, had a good structure and so it was a good read.

LoL Dats Why im So Much Betta Den U on Da Mic.. Complexity..
Still Runnin ya Fingas Rofl

honestly - did really like this piece, didnt get the title along wit the verses, plex your first verse was idk, and tramtiks verse did really make sense and then it was simplified into its simplist form, plex your second verse was aight!

this jus wasnt anything spectacular, not stood out or caught my eye.

Yeh plex your 2nd verse was better then your first. Taramatik you did very well with your verse.
overall a good drop. Could've been better.

This was put together in about 15 minutes.

Hazard, I never said you weren't and you never heard me rap.

Fortunately for you, I only responded to your last 16 bar drop with that one line.

ok

was feelin this from tramatik

we holdin em under water see if they find the air
that were designed'ta share,we recline on stairs
made of gold,while listenin 2 chimes n snares

overall good verse

plex

was feelin this the most from you

I'll let tramatic steal this magic beat, the realest flattery
I don't deal with average g's, or collab with bad emcees
imagine me on a track with Hazard, a tragedy
tragically tramatik after me, is rapping mastery
with rapid drastic keys, we are letting you tap in tapestry

wasnt the best ive seen but for how quick it was it was straight

nice job