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some dude, a diss to him

anit grabbing guns but, i'll maul~your~brain, than pop out them veins~in-ya~head
Talking About ' HALL~OF~"FAME" bitch, i havent seen your name~in~a~thread
in the game~your~a~vet? verbal murder, this rap board, will see this bastard~pray
a moment of silence, like ghetto black kids, waking up knowing its father's~day
stick gloves down your lungs, and what's this bet still this faggot~will~hate..
lyrically .. im quick to ' eat up GRUBS ' and fame's just another maggot~i~ate
bitch be gone, talking battles, with my punches, you know ill win~with~those
i would not cop any from you, know muscles, your straight skin~and~bones!
u anit got a brain~to~fight, after this diss.. it will stop this cheat~in~his~path
ive gotten more fame~on~the~site, and ive been here for a week~and~a~half !!
dawg your rap dreams~are~a~waste, in this game, you couldnt be perfect now
your a dick rider, you take more ' creams~in~the~face ' then a boring circus-clown

thought this piece was pretty straight and one of your best pieces of read.
ill break it down bud.

anit grabbing guns but, i'll maul~your~brain, than pop out them veins~in-ya~head
Talking About ' HALL~OF~"FAME" bitch, i havent seen your name~in~a~thread

great bar. very nice punch and nice rhyme and flow.

in the game~your~a~vet? verbal murder, this rap board, will see this bastard~pray
a moment of silence, like ghetto black kids, waking up knowing its father's~day

VERY nice punch. Hit hard. Great similie but the flow was abit .... rocky.

stick gloves down your lungs, and what's this bet still this faggot~will~hate..
lyrically .. im quick to ' eat up GRUBS ' and fame's just another maggot~i~ate

wasn't really feelin this bar. Great line with the grubs but i really didnt get the first line,

bitch be gone, talking battles, with my punches, you know ill win~with~those
i would not cop any from you, no muscles, your straight skin~and~bones!

great bar. probably in the running for the best in this piece.

u anit got a brain~to~fight, after this diss.. it will stop this cheat~in~his~path
ive gotten more fame~on~the~site, and ive been here for a week~and~a~half !!

Okay wait this is my favourite bar. Just so straight and hitting. Niceee,,

dawg your rap dreams~are~a~waste, in this game, you couldnt be perfect now
your a dick rider, you take more ' creams~in~the~face ' then a boring circus-clown

NONO wait this is my favourite bar. creams in the face. lmfao. Genius

Overally and 8/10. One of ur best pieces. nice work reynoldzzzzzzzz

This was a huge improvement from your recent drops, and it even makes me a little skeptical, if I didn't know you better.

How about you give us a little bit of history.

"u anit got a brain~to~fight, after this diss.. it will stop this cheat~in~his~path
ive gotten more fame~on~the~site, and ive been here for a week~and~a~half !! "

You sold out Illest?

not really plex, i still call illest lyrics home, just needed a new site to battle and compare with other emcees really because no one here really battles anymore

i liked this. this was a huge improvent from your usual.
it had all the usual- good structure, vocab, multis but this time you had punches
no offence man but ive always thought u were weak with the punchlines
this was probably the best verse ive seen from you.


Fav bars

dawg your rap dreams~are~a~waste, in this game, you couldnt be perfect now
your a dick rider, you take more ' creams~in~the~face ' then a boring circus-clown

in the game~your~a~vet? verbal murder, this rap board, will see this bastard~pray
a moment of silence, like ghetto black kids, waking up knowing its father's~day

so did i cee4, thanks for the feed everyone