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Real quick drop was writting this about for 30 minutes on and off. just thought i should drop something.



kids-and-groups, listen to music and now think beef-is-nothing-but-great..
riding around in whips-and-coupes, now the street-is-buzzing-with-hate .. .
this dream~is~real, so i gotta interveine with kids, and stop~the~youth..
scream~the~real, goverment's dont do anything besides block~the~truth..
resign to tha pad~and~pens, thinking hard day and night, and write~whats~dope
be glad~it~ends coz what happend to the emcee were rap was his life~and~hopes
gun-a-fool, when you see an emcee spitting it fake about to start killing-rap..
people obssed with rapper's who spit one-syllable now were's the skill-in-that?
i never chose-for-glory, but people grabbing my tee's when a trends-in-pace..
and you know-the-story better yet, people still try and defend-your-case !!

iight since u broke down mine im gonna break down urs mah nigg, LOL.



kids-and-groups, listen to music and now think beef-is-nothing-but-great..
riding around in whips-and-coupes, now the street-is-buzzing-with-hate .. .

^^^was pretty dope but wasnt really feelin it. Seemed abit forced.

this dream~is~real, so i gotta interveine with kids, and stop~the~youth..
scream~the~real, goverment's dont do anything besides block~the~truth..

^^ liked this bar alot. Spoke a good message and nice flow

resign to tha pad~and~pens, thinking hard day and night, and write~whats~dope
be glad~it~ends coz what happend to the emcee were rap was his life~and~hopes

^^^ favourite bar. probably the best bar in the piece.

gun-a-fool, when you see an emcee spitting it fake about to start killing-rap..
people obssed with rapper's who spit one-syllable now were's the skill-in-that?

again a good bar. Solid, flow was nice. Got the message across.

i never chose-for-glory, but people grabbing my tee's when a trends-in-pace..
and you know-the-story better yet, people still try and defend-your-case !!

^^ another favourite bar of mine.



All in all this was a dope piece for a quickie. you really got your message across, structure and flow was good and everything else was good as well. Nice work Scotty.

this was good for something quick

this was my fav bar

this dream~is~real, so i gotta interveine with kids, and stop~the~youth..
scream~the~real, goverment's dont do anything besides block~the~truth

your getting better buddy good lad haha.