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Im starting to get pissed/
I want to twist my glass but dont have shit to put in that bitch/
Im feeling explosive, soul corroded/
I fake my conversations/
Causing bodily abbrasions because Im self hated/
Why do I still write, I no longer care about exposure/
Just going through the motions like a brain washed soldier/
I havent been me for a while, you should know what youve seen has been a show, ask for me tomorrow and you may just find my ghost/
But really and truly to the most, I wont, this life is torture, and I wanna see how this goes/
I know that right now my life is just in a nose dive and Im just along for the ride/
Every time I try to grab the stick and pull up, life proves it has a bigger dick and gives me a cruel fuck/
But I know this is not it, just have to stay focused and pointed towards my purpose

Causing bodily abbrasions because Im self hated/
Why do I still write, I no longer care about exposure/
Just going through the motions like a brain washed soldier/

Captivating. It truly had my attention out of the entire drop. Shows potential at a story telling depth with great magnitude.

I've written stories my whole life. Just recently started writing rhymes

The rhymes we're lackluster to me but that likely isn't the focus. There seemed to be a good sense of emotion. Definitely a relatable subject for many and bits and pieces illustrated images. Sounds like it was off the top and I can respect that. There's more power and captivation in a story from the soul than a pack of good rhymes. Although piecing a nice rhyme scheme to a short story like this would be next to flawless.