Last Ripple - Realm

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Last Ripple - Realm

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Let's be honest, this place needs to remain in the rubble,
none of us made it, a bunch of no names with fame in a bubble,
if i'm center stage, it's to juggle, almost every single day is a struggle,
beneath the thunder and clouds we drown under the crowd,
but somehow, we're all the same collective drops of rain in the puddle,
It's funny lookin' back, reading through all the lost writtens,
thought every bar was fire and ya'll gassed me like some holocaust victims,
well fuck you, especially you, for showing support I never deserved,
so what I was a little clever with words, it's whatever of course,
I still can't believe you let me think my shit was better than yours,
Well anyways I'm here, It's Spring... I'm sittin' at my desk and it sucks,
Why's the forum back? I don't care, that's right I'm Fresh outta fucks,
I'm just glad I've got a decent job, cause in a week some of you make less than a buck,
it's probably karma for thinking i'd be sellin' tacos out of a Mexican truck,
To tell you the truth, I feel like this short piece is just a waste of my time,
Our lives go separate paths and I'm borderline complacent with mine,
This is still getting posted cause I'm not one for changing my mind,
my second step to writing this is showing 'complexity', my first was aiming to rhyme,
I'm not here lookin' to battle but some of you leave a bitter taste,
worst content than Trump's twitter page, Tom drunk on his liquor phase,
Bill stuck on his figure ways, still trying to sculpt his body like figure 8's,
I swear this site is polluted with aggression and hate,
I feel 'invested', this Depression is Great and I haven't even mentioned our weight,
From bold and admired to old and retired, some of us go as far as digestin' the plate,
I used to believe I came here to vent and release all my tension,
but it's the other way around, i would always feast on attention,
battling to add names beneath my greedy extra needy possessions..
how many wins i could rack up in my Palace?, was not the easiest question,
but i'm thankful for every single one of you that helped to feed my obsession.
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Dope man! Love the story, and the closer.
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Thanks. This was just whatever came to mind as I typed. Kind of had no real direction besides just a big exhale of "welp this is it. This is where we're at now. So let me just pay homage. Oh and what's this.. (reads my old content) damn I was trash, I should've listened to Jesus." Lol if people returned back to illest I could definitely see myself being more active in the written department
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