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kill my blood,and ill come back wit a ressurection//
spill my bud,and ill make the death toll go up faster than erections//
im back for the first time and im bringin tha truest shit//
exploding from this deceased life choked up wit the bluest shit//
have me turn to completely nothing//
come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin//
freedom of speech,well listen to this//
fuck that nigga screech,stopp the diss//
give it back at the real kids that are pissed//
sum matrix shit shot at and all of the bullets missed//
the only hood u in is the one stitched on ur shirt//
come to my side and see who snitched and was murked//
im back from the dead to hunt all of u wit this line//
no real shit on ya head coz im back for the first time//

yeah im tryin to do sumtin that was a freestyle so it may be ruff but leave me sum feed back please

"come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin//
freedom of speech,well listen to this// "

My god. I'm going to cry. I really need to get drunken jesus's phone #. I would wake him up for this one.

lol @ complexity.

The first bar had the second line alot longer than the first and it blew the flow and that was a bad piece starter.

this is probably the best drop in the scriptures i`ve ever seen


this bar amazed me

freedom of speech,well listen to this//
fuck that nigga screech,stopp the diss//



illest saviour has returned........

u suck dick

KILL YOURSELF

how bout 'back for the last time'

I give you and A for.... Suckin at Life

lol. dead silence. work on ya vocab and include more multis. dont be so cheesy and elementary too. dont worry bro. neva give up .


but seriously LMFAOROFLOLOL at ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ everyone.

yeah i no but thanx for the feed i guess im just tryin sumin tho ya no

so tha freedom of speech bar was good or are u guys being sarcastic?

Are you all to dumb - to not make fun of him over this line "have me turn to completely nothing//
come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin// "?