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Call Me Winter Bitch, Cuz Me Spittin a Metaphor Don't Make Em Clap-n-Sheez ..||
They Just Scratch Their Heads Then When They Leave it Looks Like Santa's-Been ..||
Females Messin With My Mind, Like There's Still Feelings Left-in-My-Brain ..||
im The Best-in-This-Game, a Mastermind When i Say Check-it-is-Mate ..||
Callin Me Every Name, Asshole, a Twat a Bastard, a Cunt-a-Prick ..||
So When ur Finished Taking My Pride Get On ur Knees And Suck-My-Dick ..||
i Ain't Thrown a Solid Punch in Months, ill Take a Swing And This Bitch-is-Wary ..||
Fuckin Rookies Rappin Like They're Playin 'Pin The Finger On The Dictionary ..||

Yeah Lol.

lolol

yep, i can tell this was abit rushed dont really think you put to much effort in.. i cant leave you great feedback from the minimal amount of bars but i can sure damn try!

this was a typical drop from you, same style punches.. multis .. the lot .

Call Me Winter Bitch, Cuz Me Spittin a Metaphor Don't Make Em Clap-n-Sheez ..||
They Just Scratch Their Heads Then When They Leave it Looks Like Santa's-Been ..||

ok this was my least fav bar in the whole drop but it still was straight..

Females Messin With My Mind, Like There's Still Feelings Left-in-My-Brain ..||
im The Best-in-This-Game, a Mastermind When i Say Check-it-is-Mate ..||

ummmm. multis were there, just didnt grab my attention much

Callin Me Every Name, Asshole, a Twat a Bastard, a Cunt-a-Prick ..||
So When ur Finished Taking My Pride Get On ur Knees And Suck-My-Dick ..||

^ lol something i could picture you saying... this was pretty decent too..

i Ain't Thrown a Solid Punch in Months, ill Take a Swing And This Bitch-is-Wary ..||
Fuckin Rookies Rappin Like They're Playin 'Pin The Finger On The Dictionary ..||

punch was there.. probley my fav bar ..

overall this was alright i know you can do alot better when you put your mind to it and not rush it lol

uhh... what ^he said.


IMO u should get back to battling and writing for real man.

Callin Me Every Name, Asshole, a Twat a Bastard, a Cunt-a-Prick ..||
So When ur Finished Taking My Pride Get On ur Knees And Suck-My-Dick ..||

Best bar!

It was less then expected, but still u throw off some decent punches - but your not even close to showing off your complete potential! Good to see again, droppin some verses here and there.. I'm like reminiscing about the time when u dropped sick shit like two times a week.. lol.. I'd love to see u d something like that again

B-Bear wrote:Callin Me Every Name, Asshole, a Twat a Bastard, a Cunt-a-Prick ..||
So When ur Finished Taking My Pride Get On ur Knees And Suck-My-Dick ..||

Best bar!

It was less then expected, but still u throw off some decent punches - but your not even close to showing off your complete potential! Good to see again, droppin some verses here and there.. I'm like reminiscing about the time when u dropped sick shit like two times a week.. lol.. I'd love to see u d something like that again

Quite Possibly.

Anyway Thanks For The Feed ill Have To Leave Some On ur Drops Today Since i Ain't Really Left Any Recently.