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Sequence

its Sequence, always dropping on god~level, dispite the time~it~takes..
i would stop~the~devil but i am far to busy with all these whine~and~grapes..
A few rappers~in~touch of being big, thinking other wise your mind~is~brittle..
were more then a patch~of~class we make the "mona lisa" look like~a~scribble!
climbing~the~way up the wins and records, you need more then beef~stopping~me
gods of war, were dieing~to~slay hercules and the other faggots in greek~mythology!
ayo, fuck the ' army of the pharaohs cause ' its the gods of lyrics, raps-and-writtens..
playing russian roulette aiming at your " hats " and watch those 'caps'-go-spinnin..

Cee4

this kids colossal, i strike the fear of god when im battlin men are tremblin
lyrical apostle, no respect for human rights i run illest like Stallin ran the Kremlin
im numero uno i never lose focus, i got power n im crooked like a Jews nose bridge
if it aint G.O.W ya crews hopeless, yeah im a greasy bastard my pores ooze dopeness
aint signed to Rocafella but ive rocked the Micz, come out swingin mad punches 20 victims lost the fight
lyrical circumsitions leavin heads exposed tonight, Stevie Wonder im so far ahead of y`all i lost the site (sight)
im hot! basque in my glory and grab a tan, simply untouchable like Bin Laden in Afganistan
so go hatch a plan, bring the drama fam, i`ll stop you from eatin like Muslims at Ramadan
so wheres all the G`s at?, i got these lames under more pressure than Fat Joes knee caps
their pussys, straight up beef flaps, a waste of time like writin verses for 2 peoples feedback
honestly king kong aint got shit on me, im sick lyrically you can call me hepatitis Cee
unanswered callouts! they dont want it wit me, rather battle Ol Boy Slim than step n try this G!!!!

RH1NO

you were givin the wrong facts,
its not combat its far beyond that
upon attack, the gods of war
will bomb acts spittin the wrong rap
fortunately, im not a mortal im a war beast,
i could give a fuck about your peace
some talk but im about it, on the 7th day
there was light and i allowed it.....
give you an inch n you hang with the rope,
the dedication ta cope through devestation and hope
revelations and popes, mescalin aids and dope,
cradle graves gettin laid hate n strokes
to the masses, not ta rub your face in it,
but i brought you human compassion and racism
robbin for cash and greatness, classic faces
creation through ashes n masturbation
knifed in portions, choices of prolife n abortion,
wrongs rights fights and extortion
peace and war n, lynchin outcasts with the torches,
blindness wisdom sight, plite and misfortune,
a variety of continents countries and policies,
creator of common sense life vaccines and all disease
from the time you all crawled on knees,
in the hopes ta one day be as tall as me
eating and breathing, seeing feast n famine,
ill even preach on how to beat the gambit
fear sleep and cancer, deceive you with purpose
even if it defeats the answer
teach you to stand be a man and how ta fall,
after all i am berlin without the wall
gave you drugs sex and alcohol,
and provided you the strength ta live without them all

B-Bear

u subside with hate call me the BOSS, cause I revive the greats
bring back 2pac and Biggie, they spit that flow that'll divide a lake
I'm relentless like horror, send u down south to sentence your sorrow
but unlike Lucifer, I only gave u people like 10 amendments to follow
it's the annual assemblence tomorrow, but don't bring that jaded writer
don't feed him liqour and have him push the wrong buttons to create al-quaida
It was fun the last time, but we can't have all the complaints we got
had to be high when i wrote the Quaran, cause even my saints got shot
the hotline can't take all the calls, I'll have to break down these walls
an earthquake'll get cheap material to rebuild my mansion, I hate these halls
It's fuckin expensive, why do u think the peace corpses raise money?
I don't waste it dummy, I invest in ladies cause I like to taste the honey

Gutta

Gutta gave you light, gave you breathe, took away ya life, and gave u death..
Turn day to night, the same way I had ya pick up a pen, and made u write..
I been watching closely, hopin yall live correct..
Watched over problems when different clicks intersect..
Watched when yall put clips' in techs, and made innocent people hit the deck..
But I knew what I was doing when I gave yall intellects..
I make ya love to live complex, but still searchin for that simple-ness..
I made churches so you could come on Sundays to give respect
I hold lives in palms, as I spin this world..
I made men think twice about stickin they dicks in girls
Years ago they used to kill for pearls, now I changed up the envy..
Men do some stupid shit once they drank up the Henny
But I forgive, I blessed yall with the Beatles, and differents instruments..
I let Rakim shine first, so the rap game could stay influenced..
I gave Nas a lyrical gift, gave hope to ghetto thugs..
Let you watch Pac and Big become the best there ever was..
I let women have children, made boys to men, and men to fathers..
Daughter's to women, with choices on what type of life they live in
I gave you power in a nine, and after that gave you life in prison..
Some live's are privileged, some have the right to be bitchin..
At me, cuz im tryin to fix it, but this life needs difference..
I hope yall didn't take it personally when I striked with sickness..
I gave you war in different cases, sometimes when you battled in different places
Or sometimes in your own lives, when you battle different stages..
I made people think twice about crime, think twice about lyin'
Think twice about livin, and think twice about dyin..
I watch over you like the head of a eagle, by now you should be acceptin no equals..
I probably spread a disease to, ya streets and deaded ya people..
Ya wanna see what ya life is like in 20 years, I'll lend u a preview
Gave you holes to breathe through, and flesh to bleed through..
I gave you obstacles in life so You'd come to confront me,
Cuz I'm the God Almighty and you walk amongst me

Tramatik

the wind blows,the clouds gather as i sit up
i see the sins glow from mortals,lemme get up
from this chair im done readin scriptures ya see
everywhere i look these ppl got pictures of me
in their homes,wallets and now cathedrals
prayin 2 a zone,i call it miracles thru needles
they ask 4 me,cry blasphemy when i aint there
dependin on ppl wit masks ta free the nightmares (meanin doctors)
meanwhile the poor ppl runnin thru muddy waters
neglected kids turn into killaz and slutty daughters
but thru all this they claim they needin a cause
well where were they when i wuz bleedin on'a cross?
Satan bringin the fire,so im'a clash with ice
infultratin his desire im makin a sacrifice
ta show these ppl,it's the age of survival
i showed u hints in every pafe of the bible
hearin these words ur prolly enraged by ur idol
but u gotta step away from the stage of suicidal
tendencies,and try somehow believein in me
sometimes im not there so u gotta reason'ta be
mad,cursin,sayin 'u kno i really swear'ta god'
'shit gets hard,especially tryna bare this job'
i notced mosta u think with death,i choose
its YOU who tampers with life n what lies do
they shatter ur soul and its seen in ur eyes to
think u got it hard?try walkin in my shoes

U need to edit something in my verse:

"U subside with hate, call me the BOSS cause I revive the greats"

Good lookin peeps..

This was just FUCKING AWESOME.

This is just. Like omg. This is just so great. I especially liked cee4s verse.
Specially these 2 bars :

im hot! basque in my glory and grab a tan, simply untouchable like Bin Laden in Afganistan
so go hatch a plan, bring the drama fam, i`ll stop you from eatin like Muslims at Ramadan
so wheres all the G`s at?, i got these lames under more pressure than Fat Joes knee caps
their pussys, straight up beef flaps, a waste of time like writin verses for 2 peoples feedback


SequencE was great at starting off. Really set the mood. Favourite bar :

ayo, fuck the ' army of the pharaohs cause ' its the gods of lyrics, raps-and-writtens..
playing russian roulette aiming at your " hats " and watch those 'caps'-go-spinnin..


I love gutta's verse. He really sticks to the theme and his metas are great.
Fave Bars:

Gutta gave you light, gave you breathe, took away ya life, and gave u death..
Turn day to night, the same way I had ya pick up a pen, and made u write..



Rh1nos flow was awesome and his rhyme scheme was great. Favourite Lines:

fortunately, im not a mortal im a war beast,
i could give a fuck about your peace
some talk but im about it, on the 7th day


B-Bears verse was sweet. Would've wanted to see more. Fave bars:

It was fun the last time, but we can't have all the complaints we got
had to be high when i wrote the Quaran, cause even my saints got shot

Finally, Tramatiks verse was very...philosophical if i can call it that. I like the way he's writes. It's very intelligent. Fave bar:

but thru all this they claim they needin a cause
well where were they when i wuz bleedin on'a cross?

^^^^^^^^^ such an awesome line.

All in all guys VERY NICE JOB!

9.5/10. Great work guys. Hope to see more.

yo thanks for the good feedback Ol Boy Slim thats what we r trying to get out of this piece, good feedback..

yall put in some hard hitting verses good job crew

this was a dope drop!!!

thanks for the detailed feed slim

great job fellas

uppin some fizeed

Yeah, thank you for takin time..

Honestly, now that i read through my verse the second time, i hated it.. lol.. thought i could've rewritten it to become a lot better.. but anyhow, thanks again Slim for the feedback..

UPPIN SUCKAS!

lol Dis Wus a Good Piece.. Dont Think i Cant Catch Some Of Yall Subliminals Dough..
i Felt Guttas Shit It Gamme Like a Proof Feel.. Lyk it Reminded Me of Some Shit
Proof Would be on.. Sequence u Wus a Nice Opener.. Dis Piece Wus Good Ova All

cheers for the feed. B Bear i know what you mean. i looked over my verse and thought it could of been way better. i wasnt really sure what the topic was.
Hazard i couldnt see any subliminals.-not directed at you anyway lol

UPPIN SOME FEED

uppin mas por favor

Sequence - A usual verse, you would come to expect from him. Good wordplay, a few nice punches.

c4 - A bit disappointing, but not without memorable lines "aint signed to Rocafella but ive rocked the Micz"

B-Bear - less than expected, as you mentioned, still a good enough verse, not to take down the impact of the collab.

Gutta - A very off an on verse. Some of it was fire, some of it was, eh?

Tramatik - One of the better verses, I have seen from you in a bit. A better rhyme scheme than usual.

Rhino - Incredible verse, easily the best one in the collab. You're probably the most elevated emcee in the history of Illest.

Overall: Solid, but not great.

It's a lot to read, so you want to come with your dopest verses, and keep people interested.

thanks plex.. uppin

SequencE- Your verse was decent, nothing stood out to me, but ur verse flowed nicely, and u had some dope multies, n' nice wordplay too. But overall your verse was solid, 7/10

Fave Bars:

A few rappers~in~touch of being big, thinking other wise your mind~is~brittle..
were more then a patch~of~class we make the "mona lisa" look like~a~scribble!

ayo, fuck the ' army of the pharaohs cause ' its the gods of lyrics, raps-and-writtens..
playing russian roulette aiming at your " hats " and watch those 'caps'-go-spinnin..


Cee4- I personaly feel ur verse in the last GOW collab was better, but u had better multies in this verse, your punches were aight. 8/10


Fave Bars:

im numero uno i never lose focus, i got power n im crooked like a Jews nose bridge
if it aint G.O.W ya crews hopeless, yeah im a greasy bastard my pores ooze dopeness

so wheres all the G`s at?, i got these lames under more pressure than Fat Joes knee caps
their pussys, straight up beef flaps, a waste of time like writin verses for 2 peoples feedback

honestly king kong aint got shit on me, im sick lyrically you can call me hepatitis Cee
unanswered callouts! they dont want it wit me, rather battle Ol Boy Slim than step n try this G!!!!


Rh1no- Damn... u had the best verse in this collab, you had a good rhyme scheme, some dope multies, andu stayed on topic ur whole verse. 9/10


Fave Bars:

the dedication ta cope through devestation and hope
revelations and popes, mescalin aids and dope

you were givin the wrong facts,
its not combat its far beyond that
upon attack, the gods of war
will bomb acts spittin the wrong rap

knifed in portions, choices of prolife n abortion,
wrongs rights fights and extortion


B-Bear- Your verse way better than ur verse in the last collab IMO. You had some good multies, 7/10


Fave Bars:

u subside with hate call me the BOSS, cause I revive the greats
bring back 2pac and Biggie, they spit that flow that'll divide a lake

I'm relentless like horror, send u down south to sentence your sorrow
but unlike Lucifer, I only gave u people like 10 amendments to follow

it's the annual assemblence tomorrow, but don't bring that jaded writer
don't feed him liqour and have him push the wrong buttons to create al-quaida


Gutta- Your verse was decent, you started out strong, but u fell off towards the middle, the closer was nice tho, 8/10


Fave Bars:

Gutta gave you light, gave you breathe, took away ya life, and gave u death..
Turn day to night, the same way I had ya pick up a pen, and made u write..

Daughter's to women, with choices on what type of life they live in
I gave you power in a nine, and after that gave you life in prison..


Tramatik- Nice verse, u definetely had a good rhyme scheme, some nice multies, decent verse overall, 8/10

Fave Bars:

meanwhile the poor ppl runnin thru muddy waters
neglected kids turn into killaz and slutty daughters

i notced mosta u think with death,i choose
its YOU who tampers with life n what lies do

they shatter ur soul and its seen in ur eyes to
think u got it hard?try walkin in my shoes



Overall- 48/60

thanks to everyone for the feed

collab #3 coming soon muaaahhhaaahahhahaha

this was good and very longgggggg haha. liek plex said next time you all do another collab keep it bangin so people will continue reading it and not stop at someones verse.
i think sequence is getting better. better with the multies and getting better with words.
rh1no's was the one that stood out and the best of all 5? or 6 haha
cee 4 i dunno if ive ever seen something you've written? but your verse was heaps good in some bits and just average in others. not that im any better hahaha.
b bear your verse was ok i think you could have done better though
guttas was good too.
tramatik, good verse, one of the better ones keep up the good work buddy
good work guys