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Posted: **Wed Oct 17, 2007 2:11 pm**

First attempt LOL.

bitch listen here lemme make on thing clear
ya by ol' slim is a asian you should fear
hey yo listen to that son
once i be cockin me gun there wont be anywhere to run son
leave u runnin with ya dick between ya legs
hang you up with pegs, drinking beer by the keg
only 14 already doing an underage binge
flip you up like a door with a fucked up hinge
blast you so much the hair on ya head be singed

diggg it.

Posted: **Wed Oct 17, 2007 2:15 pm**

lookin'4somefeed

Posted: **Wed Oct 17, 2007 4:35 pm**

Stick to writing, i can freestyle better off the word yellow

Posted: **Wed Oct 17, 2007 7:08 pm**

harsh but true.

Posted: **Wed Oct 17, 2007 10:18 pm**

Wow..U Typed it LoL it Wusnt Freestylin! Itz Keystylin..
Deres a Difference..

Posted: **Thu Oct 18, 2007 3:17 am**

Agree with Complex, stick to your writtens for now.. keystylin would come naturally later on when u learn how to put together words and sentences in the right way.. So keep droppin..

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A bit of free style

A bit of free style