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Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:51 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
this was short obviously..but it flowed good..favorite part wud be this bar

i'll Switch Tha Keyz And Clip Ya Knees Just To Give Ya Hips A Tease
Drop A Hydrogen Bomb So You Aint Got Shit Ta Breathe

cool shit^..liked it..if u plan on doin a part 3 definetly make it longer but overall 4 a short piece this was cool

Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 4:48 am
by RH1NO
i liked this still on point with the flow the first one was better

like ta see what you can do with a longer version

nice lil drop homie

Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 1:42 am
by B-Bear
Nice lil drop, flowed good for a freestyle.. multies were on point.. can sense like a sorta new york style in your writing.. lol.. anyway, it's all good man... i liked it