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You can not believe what your optics is reading..when I make writtens..
I drop it with reason..that's why I'm the only emcee who gets props when I drop
topics with meaning! you can't handle this shit, yet alone hold a candle to this..
i'll dismantle your flips..when I spit malice with text, most you dont have valid respect
that's why put your 'career in jeopardy' like Alex Trebek..
people are hating the best..cuz I haven't dropped a Where I Stand In A While..
I'm going back to punchlines..I could never abandon the style..
since ezforum..even MICZ said, you got to political, you aint as lyrical, you on the crack pipe?
get your facts right..i never fell off...the best punchline I ever wrote was last night!
I got beef that's unresolved, with Lawgix And Hazard, I'll deal with them bastards
for now I'm just holding down the site...guarding it from all the attackers
I'm not going backwards...I'm moving forward faster..
so I 'murder styles' like a LOX hit man, and stop disaster..
why do I need a punchline, I'm already the lyrical master..
so what if its half assed, I get more props, cuz I put myself apart from the rest
it's not cuz they feel my drop exactly, it's a mark of respect
no matter how wack it be..everyone knows I can drop any emcee, take their style..
and make it look stupid against me..give me 5 seconds..
fuck a written..I freestyle because I like spittin..this isn't a pawn shop
no bargains..I write how I want, less multis that's fine..if you want them
read an ekoms drop..(fo real) I'm not downplaying his style..he is sick with the verses..
but I'm diverse..rapping with purpose..
I'll put a blade in the game, fuck, scratching the surface..
I'm leaving slashes, attacking, blood splattering, that's all in this drop
I'll be the fucking defendant on trial for killing hip hop!
that's not literal it's metaphysical...who wants to be buried today?
like Big And Pac you're getting carried away..
it's scary to say, I'm nephritis with this very spit..
hip hop is reborn and I'm shopping for carriages..
I wanted to stop back on the site..show some life..plex is still dominate
and if you want to battle..just call me out..I'm all for it

okay complexity the structure kind of throw me off at the start but i manged to get through all of it..

there were some lines that i thought could have been spiced a little.

so I 'murder styles' like a LOX hit man, and stop disaster..
why do I need a punchline, I'm already the lyrical master.. that bar didnt appeal to me much..

but you did have some fire bars witch is more like you.

i'll dismantle your flips..when I spit malice with text, most you dont have valid respect
that's why put your 'career in jeopardy' like Alex Trebek.. < that was fire

since ezforum..even MICZ said, you got to political, you aint as lyrical, you on the crack pipe?
get your facts right..i never fell off...the best punchline I ever wrote was last night! < that was also fire..

they were probley the two best bars imo, anyway this was pretty good in most parts !

i liked this one the best out of your recent drops. your style was more aggressive here and i liked it better than your usual drops. i like your other writtens but i just prefer somethin a bit harder and this didthe job.

I wanted to stop back on the site..show some life..plex is still dominate
and if you want to battle..just call me out..I'm all for it


set it up then

Nice catches freeflo and thanks for the feedback c4

np uppin