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my loVe
Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 7:16 am
by pZy1
I'm chokin upp
Starin at the haZe while its brokin up
Open dutch
Sayin fill me up like I'm at the puMp
Dreams of purple kush..an that sour deisel
Can't think of a better way for me 2 greet my people
Com an Meet my people
Brooklyn 7-1-8
Where white widow is allways good
But it aint better then the grapes
An iF its dRo I want mO
Stuff it till it can't clOse
Soo much smoke its clogin up the ozone
Home grown..cali kush..lemme get a fuckin bush
G13
ak-47
But the bKay haZe is like buDs grown in heaVen
I'm smokin up the streets
Soo the blunts rolled an reving
Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 11:24 am
by MesaR
the topic name you used really had nothing to do with what you were writing on anyway.
unless your love is guns brooklyn petrol pumps and smoking blunts.. and make ur bars the same length
you really should stop using fillers between each bar..it just wrecks the flow
ill brake it down ..
I'm chokin upp
Starin at the haZe while its broke up
^ noo choke and broke rhyme, but not up and up < bad flow.
Dreams of purple kush..an that sour deisel
Can't think of a better way for me 2 greet my people
^^ ugh i dont get this bar
An iF its dRo I want mO
Stuff it till it can't clOse
Soo much smoke its clogin up the ozone
first and second line sucked.
last line was straight..
But the bKay haZe is like buDs grown in heaVen
I'm smokin up the streets
Soo the blunts rolled an reving
^ not feeling it man..
topic was sorta played out talking about a bunch of bullshit.
Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 11:53 am
by pZy1
I didn't say 1 thing about gunz my man...I'm talkin about the haze in brooklyn..that's my love..ak 14 is a type of weed...see u guys got soo much critisizm an don't even kno wat ur talkin about..
An I'm talkin about fillin my blunt when I'm sayin I'm waitin at the pump sayin fill me up..
Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 3:06 pm
by Momeijah
u Give Weed-Smokers a Bad Name.
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 2:26 am
by Cee4
white widow is the shit. people talk shit and say your gettin white widow and ak 47 when its really just homegrown. u need to go to Amsterdam to try the real stuff lol
anyway the piece was alright. nothin special but ok if it was a freestyle
Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 9:52 pm
by Haz
I'm chokin upp
Starin at the haZe while its brokin up
Open dutch
Sayin fill me up like I'm at the puMp
lol Dat Shit Wuz Funny.. i Liked Wudd ya Topic wus..
Dis Drop Wus Good
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:18 am
by кℓαѕѕιιcк
LOL I read this last night
i didnt think i read it right
so i read it again
AND FUCK THIS IZ FUNNY
iight im sorry man
U know when i read the title i thought..."hmm could be gud"
but didnt have much of a relavance
unless as sequence said
"if smoking Bluntz and Gas Pumps iz ya love"
its iight..keep practisin man__as i say with Sex"PRACTISE MAKES PERFECT"!!
do ya thng..