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Call me the "Shit" cuz the hits im "pissin"
If the AK "Hit" Ya limbs'll be "missin"
it's war when the beat drop,Cock it Back an "blast flow"
Punchlines Stop Vitals, I'm takin over like "Castro"
Like air raids and hand grenades, my punches dont need to be close
With this style, I can miss by a mile, and still hit harder then most

punchlines were so-so, overall this was fairly decent... could've been longer.. u used more multies in this one than ur second.. n wats up with u n cuba lol...n e ways it was better than ur second verse IMO... keep droppin

Agree.

Just a lil piece of advice when it comes to flow, this is something i was told when i entered this site.. always try and make the second line in a bar longer then the first. especially if it's a written.. also have in mind the length of words.. that should really help u improve your flow