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I had an epiphany swinging through the blackness of night
scarred with the death of religon our people we fight
together, One inhales while the rest exhale our might
with one swipe witness the fleeing of life and light
penetrating your armour and shield; their light and feeble
and your pride is void cuz your courage is as broad as a needle
depecting mental images of Ill spoken wriers and veterans
lacing the dopest flows its the cycle that i pedal in
bringing me back to child hood, before the greats died, I
Never wonder Why... but rather recognize their lives
So Lie on the surface of the sun and feel the devotion
My words are or not like love letters with no emotion
I'll make the sky turn green, with everything so blatant
witness the fleeing of gravity now the earth is vacant

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So Lie on the surface of the sun and feel the devotion
My words are or not like love letters with no emotion
I'll make the sky turn green, with everything so blatant
witness the fleeing of gravity now the earth is vacant

liked that alot^..overall this was pretty damn nice,flow was great i said it 2 a couple beats..good stuff glad 2 see we gettin some new talent again

nice verse. it flowed well and you used multis well. Id say this is the best of your drops in the scriptures. Like Tramatik said its good to get some new talent on here.

Thanx To Both Of You.

yeah dude, we will have to collab on something.

My words are or not like love letters with no emotion <<
thats the only thing there i could point out as not being good as your other parts of the verse,
i thought you could have worded this line much better, but there probley wasnt alot you could do with it.

I had an epiphany swinging through the blackness of night
scarred with the death of religon our people we fight
together, One inhales while the rest exhale our might
with one swipe witness the fleeing of life and light

imo, those were the ' oh factor ' in your verse

pretty tight shit man, Stay up.. Id love to see more drops or even battles from you. ill be looking out for em

1-One-1

Hell yeah bro.

Id be down for that.

damn Ezcome. wow man. that was one hell of a verse. im tellin ya.

Yeah cheers bro.

Yah this was dope. I liked it a lot man.

It looks simple but definitely isn't.

It's nice to see an emcee with a different perspective up in the scriptures.

"penetrating your armour and shield; their light and feeble
and your pride is void cuz your courage is as broad as a needle
depecting mental images of Ill spoken wriers and veterans
lacing the dopest flows its the cycle that i pedal in
bringing me back to child hood, before the greats died, I "

Learn to spell though homie, lol.

Damm i thought use would miss that.

lol