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this with uhh...me,sequence,fabolicious,and jizzy.

yeh we were bored....

[email protected] says:
old boy, your rhymes arent sweet, your shits sour..
look at your pic, anit u that dude from rush hour?


*care `____rrrriver! Zoo York, Class Of '93 says:
i heard about a doo named fabolicious
i heard his rymes were oh so vicious
heard his first mixtape
laughed, put on my bapes
went over to his crib
said to him "man stop rappin kid"




[J][Z][Z][Y] ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()(>>>>><<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>><<says
bitch go cry to yo dad if your ackting sad
bitch yo know im bad
i run up and put that knife in yo back
crack yo spine
take your bitch damn she fine, and she's all mine.




•●●•ƒαвσli¢iσuS•●●•__[may not be ere/ifts important call me] says:
man ill smack ya across tha face wit a wrench datll kleave you for tha whole game on tha bench
•●●•ƒαвσli¢iσuS•●●•__[may not be ere/ifts important call me] says:
man as Pac says//
Keerp ya hjead up stay up//
watch out boui im in fo day lay-up




[email protected] says:
Talking ' Benches ' like thats Fabs Favrite Sporting-Postion..
only time your raps make money, is when ur starting-commesion!




`____rrrriver! Zoo York, Class Of '93 says:
ayo sequence
i may not be able to afford a mic
yeh i probably cant afford a bike
but listen
my rhyme skills kills your skills
least i get to pay my bills
you a faker, im a skater
you a loser im a Shooter



•●●•ƒαвσli¢iσuS•●●•__[may not be ere/ifts important call me] says:
now sequence why arnt you on audio i wanna listen//
Oh wait i didnt realise,you couldnt afford a mic//
coz u in housng commision//





`____rrrriver! Zoo York, Class Of '93 says:
ayo i heard about a kid named jizzy
swear he thought he was off the hizzy
tellin you the truth, hes a missy
he may be rich, still a bitch
may be tall, aint got no balls
may be strong, maybe im wrong
but he cant put a single verse in a song





[J][Z][Z][Y] ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()(>>>>><<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>><<???? says:
river sad he is a shooter
he cant even afford a mic
or a bike
haha imma watch him chuck sike
you should see him fight
all he can do is bite





•●●•ƒαвσli¢iσuS•●●•__[may not be ere/ifts important call me] says:
yo..
im the actual//
factual//
crime Supnatural//
slitting fools national//
its understandable//
Now back onto the topic//
u may be hard//
but ur girl said ur penis wus microspic//





`____rrrriver! Zoo York, Class Of '93 says:
yo fab feed your ego even more
matter of a fact, your girls pussy still sore
think on the streets they call her a whore
like u said, back on topic
in a fight imma kick yo ass to the tropics




[email protected] says:
i am past your skill level, you kids shouldnt have ' spoke-to-me '
my names known around the globe, you got problems ' locally '




`____rrrriver! Zoo York, Class Of '93 says:
i got problems locally?
man your fame level aint close to me
i heard that you bite lyrics, cant write no rhymes
oh wait are those hairs on the backside of your palms?

Sq outshined the rest of u..

Nothin particularly good, except Seq's bars..u had some nice ones.. the rest was basically wack.. some of the lines had potential, but were rounded off terribly.. when i read through i was like thinkin that first line's straight, like to see how he'll kill this one.. but nothin we're even close.. i'm just being honest.. but keep writin.. i was at that level when i started rhyming, about 2 years ago.. so don't give up man.. just don't post everything u write, cause that'll just piss the rest of us off.. drop here and there.. be patient.. read verses, learn techniques.. that'll help u

um..ok how do i put this..flat out,you all sucked,hate 2 say it but u did..sequence i kno ur way fuckin better dude musta just been a bad day or sumthin..and 2 the rest of u keep tryin,dont take this personal just bein honest,f ur gonna do another one of these try harder..anyways to everyone involved in this,keep tryin u wont get bettter if u dont keep practicing,stay @ it

lol tramatik, i didnt know the this was getting posted after the cypher.

eh wack. Sequence was not bad. Ive seen better from Ol Boy, Fab was poor and who the fuck is Jizzy lol