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WEAK EMCEES 2.

Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 5:53 pm
by MesaR
. Verbally Murder ' Weak Emcees ' With My Powerful FLOWS-AND-RHYMES..
I Anit Claiming Nothing But I " SELL MORE CRACK " Then A-HOES-BEHIND.

. I Am Lyrically Ripping Up This Rap Thing, Nothing Can Beat My " BARS-AND-LINES.
Dissing Me, It Will Be Like A ' TRAGIC EVENT " Ill Easily Put " SCARS-IN-LIVES "

. At My Best.. Its " MUSIC TO YOUR EARS " Like A " HEAD-PHONE-SET..
You ON A TRACK Would Sound Like You and YOUR TESTOSTERONE-NEVER-MET.

. You ' WEAK EMCEES ' You Shouldnt Have " NEVER-SPOKE " OR Touched INK-WITH-PAPER..
I Am Always Dope What " EVER-I-WROTE.. And You VETS Are On The BRINK-OF-FAILURE.

.. Leaving You In Immense Shock, And Nothing But " FEAR-FOR-DAYS "
Cause Its Scary To know I " RIP UP VETS " Just At Thirteen " YEARS-OF-AGE "



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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:47 pm
by RH1NO
well if you take my topic at least leave some feed lol

this was a coo lil dilly flowed nicely think it was too short though

. You ' WEAK EMCEES ' You Shouldnt Have " NEVER-SPOKE " OR Touched INK-WITH-PAPER..
I Am Always Dope What " EVER-I-WROTE.. And You VETS Are On The BRINK-OF-FAILURE.

^^fav bars

havent seen nothin from you in a minute this was good though

stay up

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 8:28 am
by MesaR
Thanks Rh1no.

upping.

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:39 am
by -TraMaTiK-
the bar rhino mentioned was nice,but it way too shortttttttt lol,cool drop tho u shud drop more often its good 2 getta new drop from an old head once in'a while. overall 2 short homie make it longer and keep droppin u sick for 13

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:40 pm
by LadySam
good job buddy, but i dunno i dunno if all the multies ryhmed well.

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 9:59 pm
by EZCome
This was pretty sweet but i rekon u over use your multies and it fucks up ya flow but other that that it was pretty good man.

Short but good.

Stay Up.