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Yeah People..
Me and Kelsea Used to be like Romeo and Juliet//
georgia and weezy//
50 and olivia//
man i gotta take it e-z//
but damn i cant man//

This Is the most awkward Stiuation Ive faced in my life//
I wanna Threaten ya Boi with my knife//
But others did suggest//
with Those actions you wont be impressed//

I just aint thinking straight nower days//
im trippin like an oncoming tidal//
But your My only chance for survival//
..yeh and as sean Kingston says"u have me suicidal"

People often ask me "ey Fab why do you rhyme"//
i reply in one line//
Its Just my stylish way to release my mind//

yeh...Uuuh just with tha flo
there aint 1 at tha Moment but Its Just a poetry Drop..Thx fer ya time
feedback will be appriciated and feel free to comment Negative on my rhymin /..



http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post55616.html#55616

hm, didn't seem like a poem cept for the parts that didn't rhyme lol

i didn't really like this piece all that much, the topic seemed to jump from one thing to the next every 2 bars
and..the flow was choppy... the intro lost my interest really and the rest of it was just too basic for my liking

i guess for starters its ok tho

it wuz a freestyle i did during the middle of My PDHPHE exam